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2022-07-24 04:16

I wrote my first review around 15-20 chapters. I loved the super exciting beginning of this book and honestly, after 30 chapters, I felt like it was going downhill gradually. I wanted to drop the book. Hope the author doesn't find this offensive 😶I love your writing style, love the character development but the siren twist to the CEO novel felt like it could not be handled well. But oh boy, was I wrong? I definitely was! Am I glad I didn't give up on this book? I def am! 100 chapters down, I am more than confident that this is a masterpiece. I don't know why this site is not marketing this book well and why it has low rankings and all compared to other books but just dive into this magical world. Don't let the votes and stuff determine this book's worth for you. ✨ Ml's & Fl's chemistry is on fire. Enemies-to-lovers, full-blown. When they are together, they can their words to kill each other or use their hands to lit you on fire. You can feel the tension and steam. ✨ The FL is strong and morally grey. Who doesn't loves a sassy woman? But when her identity and morally grey character are thrown into the mix, you just know that you are in for some adventure. She is used to being rough towards the world but ML brings out the softest part in her and that makes her hate him more. But they are so cute at times that you will turn into a puddle ✨ Second Fl and Second Ml will keep you on your toes ✨The mysteries feel like thrillers. You can feel your heart racing ✨ There is Gold. For the love of God, we all love him the most in this book ✨ But I must warn you. This book is not for the faint-hearted. There is angst, there is that pain, sadness, and triggers but the pure love, sweetness, humor, adventure, and steam makes for every little pain I can go on and on about this book but I will stop here. Hats off to the author. This is a masterpiece and oh boy, thank God that I didn't drop it!!! The writing is downright awesome♥🧜🏻‍♀️♥

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First of all, lemme appreciate your efforts in writing this long constructive review ❤️ All criticism and praises are packed in a single review and the first part made me go "..." Haha, jokes apart, I know my work is not perfect and I am gradually trying to improve. Thank you for persisting in this with me. Lots of love to you💟 Really really appreciate this in-depth review

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Auroraaa:First of all, lemme appreciate your efforts in writing this long constructive review ❤️ All criticism and praises are packed in a single review and the first part made me go "..." Haha, jokes apart, I know my work is not perfect and I am gradually trying to improve. Thank you for persisting in this with me. Lots of love to you💟 Really really appreciate this in-depth review
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Why did you stop updating the book?

Auroraaa:First of all, lemme appreciate your efforts in writing this long constructive review ❤️ All criticism and praises are packed in a single review and the first part made me go "..." Haha, jokes apart, I know my work is not perfect and I am gradually trying to improve. Thank you for persisting in this with me. Lots of love to you💟 Really really appreciate this in-depth review
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