Item: Hp: The Outcast
Rating: 5
Author: Word7

Word7Lv121yr

2024-03-25 12:46

Can someone spoil me what exactly happened with Jon's mother and Tom Riddle? I don't care so just go ahead and spoil that secret. I will continue to read though.

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