Item: Hp: The Outcast
Rating: 5
Author: leojesus120

leojesus120Lv22yr

2022-05-09 20:32

I'm a fan from your previous work (The Secret Heir) so i'm looking foward to see the changes. A mysterious first chapter, hope we can have a long story ahead

Hp: The Outcast

confused4you

4.2

103 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies8

confused4youAuthor

thanks, I do hope to make the story better and longer.

2yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Add more tag: #transmigration #reencarnation #OC #OC MALE 😒 #canyon story #heartbreak #drama .......

confused4you:thanks, I do hope to make the story better and longer.

2yr

ReaderLensLv4

So are you still gonna continue the secret heir or should we switch to this one?

confused4you:thanks, I do hope to make the story better and longer.

2yr

confused4youAuthor

switch

ReaderLens:So are you still gonna continue the secret heir or should we switch to this one?

2yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

does it contains same amount of heart breaking drama.... ???😅 . as in Teen Wolf .

confused4you:switch

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2yr

confused4youAuthor

no i don't think so

Young_fruit_Smiley:does it contains same amount of heart breaking drama.... ???😅 . as in Teen Wolf .

2yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

then I'll give it a try .... !!😂 .

confused4you:no i don't think so

2yr

confused4youAuthor

go ahead

Young_fruit_Smiley:then I'll give it a try .... !!😂 .

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2yr

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It started pretty good but when he started his music it got way too much focus and the story seemed to stagnate. It got too boring for me personally but maybe other people like 3 chapters with 80% song lyrics in it. If you ignore the music part it is a decent story with little flaws that can easily be improved upon

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it was even acceptable, but it went to the bottom the moment he had his first interaction with Victoria Potter, with the story getting boring and weird... it's just confusing and boring

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Maybe copy the description of your old fanfic , all we get from your description is that you don’t write well

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are u still updating this novel???______

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The Story is good, the writing is fabulous, but Cotton 🐍 is just perfect

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