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Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv12yr
2022-06-07 19:28

Honestly I was intrigued, the hero is a 4 star villain, the world building and the path of power 1 star, the events and scenario 1 star deserves 6/6 stars, actually it's hard to get my interest because most of the works for me I can't read because they are so boring, frivolous and stupid

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