It is not an exaggeration to say that this story is very promising. I'm very sure that if the author are able to give this novel justice, it will be one of the most sought after novel in this app. May you continue to write this epic tale, and I look forward to seeing its completion.

This is for you author, since one can have a good discussion with you without getting heated up even if one attacks your book, so i decided to make a more in depth review and while many points still stand I removed the points where I out of my own preferences was a little unfair. Writing Quality: 3/5 It's MTL, so don't expect anything amazing. Especially in the earlier chapters, there are many issues like wrong pronouns, wrong sentence structures or swapped roles in a sentence and so on. But I have seen a lot worse and it is enjoyable if you like the story itself. I think just by going through the older chapters and looking at the comments where a helpful reader already wrote the correct version and then correct it, would make it a 4/5 for new readers. Stability of Updates: 4/5 Not much to say. Coming from royalroad 14 chapters a week is inconceivable and impressive. I always imagine that the quality suffers, so I don't like this way very much and would like to see quality over quantity like on royalroad. But I know that people on this site probably see it differently. Story Development: 3/5 The problem I have with the story is that I like to see the way the MC has to go in order to become strong or even the strongest, but instead it was only said that he had a training arc with the goddesses, but it was skipped and instead he slowly unlocks the abilities he learned from them through the system. So the reader just sees a list of (yet locked/lvl 0) active and passive skills the MC gets at the beginning of the story and that makes them seem less special and deserved (even if they are). Another thing I dislike is that the story skips around too much, so there is not enough time for proper kingdom/world building, character development, forming of relationships and so on. This makes everything seem less deep and lack substance. But I think the plot itself has potential. It just needs refining. Character Design 3/5 Like I said, everything lacks substance and so do the characters and the relationship they have with the MC. I have only seen the first three wives and I can already tell that they are very cliche and the others sound to be the same. The same goes for the MC, since he is just like MC in most novels. Person with sad past gets reincarnated and becomes powerful, so he can now beat up the bad guys. And this brings up another point of criticism. Sad pasts. It has become the standard in newer novels and I don't like to see it in every book, especially if every important character gets one. MC has one and both wives he met up until now have one as well, so I would prefer if its not the same for the other wives as well. But I like that he can be ruthless if he has a reason. World Background 3/5 The quality and the amount we get is comparable to other web novels on this site and I feel like, as always, it is lacking and I would love to see more detailed worlds like in normal fantasy books, but that's just my preference and maybe people like to read more simple books on this site. I think the best thing the author can do for this book and the next is to slow down with releases, instead of two a day, maybe just write one and instead read proof, take your time to write and rewrite until you got some good quality chapters, instead of just throwing out chapters for the sake of it. Maybe check out different translators and grammar checks and go with the best you can find. I think you can do a lot better if you just take your time and you end up with a shorter/slower released but nice quality book. Instead of being a good author, try to be a very good one. I think you can do it.

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp

I really love this novel. I really like that you don't rush the meetings and I look forward to how you introduce the other female leads. I do hope you don't make it so other characters that like his wives makes too much drama out of it. I hope you put them in their place and don't drag it out. Here I might be a selfish (I mean I am), but I would love more frequent updates even tho it's already great 😅 Other things I like is the MC's personality, his interactions and thinking. The world background is great for now. I'm excited to see how it unfolds. I can say the same with the story. I also will say that I don't feel any problem with the writing, if there is any mistakes they will not destory the reading flow and the understanding. Just a thing that I wish will happen: MC to be a good leader, and rely on other in their field of pratice. I don't want him to be for example good at economy when he got his merchant wife that can do a better job. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This was my first long review and I wish you all the luck and love you can get from writing this novel! Will add comments to this review whenever I feel like I have something on my heart. 🥰

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Oh a story about five wives how interesting! Wait what do you mean it takes awhile for him to meet up with all five? What do you mean there's a pointless academy arc that takes him immediately away from said wives. When you've been taught by literal Goddesses searching for knowledge at a regular school is unbelievably tasking to read.

I honestly liked this novel a lot, however, there are many things that discourage me, the mc being placed as someone with no talent and with average potential discouraged me a lot, to the point of stopping reading several times, because there were many other more flashy novels to read, I was also quite dismayed at the way the dialogues between 3 or more characters were written, I felt a lack of emotion, when one character spoke to another, with the exception of the mc no one reacts until the end of the line, ex: The MC made a statement totally out of character for your character's speech to someone, the 3rd person wouldn't react until the mc spoke to them, as if waiting for the moment for their scene to react (of course, there were exceptions at some important moments), when the world really It doesn't work like that, if I am someone who has never killed and I speak in front of my wife I would massacre thousands of people, she would certainly scream at me at the same time, cry, or at least be at that moment, I am not I would wait for her moment of scene or the end of the conversation to react, the same with a friend, acquaintance, even my subordinate would react in some way surprised. That could be me being too perfectionist, or personal taste, but that's my humble opinion of romance.

The story skips around too much, like one week will just go by and everything that we wanted to see is just gone. I feel like the author needs to take more time to establish the relationships and develop the world.The way interactions happen seem off and lack substance. I'm not sure how to explain it. The book has potential but i think it just needs to be slower. maybe adding in some chapters that are purely character development early on would do a great deal to the overall story. It is worth a read, but don't expect anything amazing.

The story has promise but flow of story is inconsistent. Like at the end of one chapter MC laughs like madman for show about to begin and start of next chapter somehow week has already passed and story starts from random location. Second problem is basic english. Not being a native speaker isn't a reason. This kind of English you learn in 5th or 6th standard(local school). I am also an Indian and non native speaker. I tried correcting basic things in paragraph comments but I just gave up after chap 55. One solution I suggest is if Ink stone allows you to copy paste content atleast write it in MS word and do basic spell and grammer check then paste it later. 2nd solution is obviously take 20-30 mins to learn everyday, trust me it'll help you. I did it you can do it too bro.