webnovel
IndigoLionLv12yr
2022-09-21 23:22

Ok, to start, I’m Addressing The reviews others made about the pushover and nanny Mc. Believe me, it might be annoying at first but in like 10 chapters it gets much better. Right now I have read 100+ chapters and have really likEd it. However, there are a couple of oofs that turn me off a bit. + Action scenes are amazing Abilities and world background Is compelling Even if mc seems op sometimes you can see that he’s A frog in a well at some moments. Other good things but I’m Too lazy to write - First off, I don’t Like how he’s Been stuck in an itty bitty town for so many chapters, I want him to move on and explore the world, there is bound to be a LOT more interesting things. Second, I feel there is TOO much emphasis on r***. Like I get he wants to make rules and not allow those bad things to happen, but like there’s A reference to what happens to someone who r**** like every other chapter, it gets too repetitive considering he hasn’t Said anything about other things like people bullying or taking advantage or other things, he can’t control everyone. I feel like I’m the portal mini arc he progressed too fast, like a few chapters and he maxed every stat and basically just has to farm LOTS of monsters just to get the occupation Again, I hope he moves on fast, it’s getting really boring in the same place. But I lIke the book :) [img=update]

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
Replies2
IndigoLionLv1

Right forgot to add that I REALLY HOPE its not gonna turn into a kinfrom building type novel, mc should have companions but I don’t want him to have a whole 1000 people following him

MILARCHLv13

well, a warlord usually have a many follower thou.

IndigoLion:Right forgot to add that I REALLY HOPE its not gonna turn into a kinfrom building type novel, mc should have companions but I don’t want him to have a whole 1000 people following him
Other Reviews
Master_CelestialLv4
Related Stories

Sword Of Chaos

[Silver Tier Winner For WPC 158- Kingdom Building] Ancient Swords, a sword that possesses the power and potential to surpass higher beings that are stronger than Gods. Due to the threat it causes, all Ancient Swords are besieged by the Semi-Supreme Beings (beings who are almost omnipotent). That incident caused all of the Ancient Swords to be fragmented into hundreds of thousands of pieces and scattered throughout the multiverse. Even the strongest Ancient Swords which are The Sword Of Chaos and The Sword Of Origin weren't able to win against the Semi-Supreme Beings. The original counterpart of Chaos, the Sword Of Chaos, is wielded by the weakest swordsman and after 10,000 years have passed, both of them became the strongest existence in the God Realm. A lot of Supreme Gods coveted the power of the Sword Of Chaos so all of those Supreme Gods ganged up against Chaos and his wielder until Chaos and his wielder perished in the battle. Ancient Swords can't die so instead of dying, Chaos finds himself in a cave with nothing other than his power to wield Chaos itself. His Knowledge? Most of his memories are sealed by a higher being! Cultivation Base? His life was saved, not his cultivation base. Thus, he has to start everything from scratch with only his chaos sword forms as his cheat. "My previous wielder and I didn't lack power but instead, allies! So, I will create my kingdom, the entire realm as my palace! Those Supreme Gods better not get senile or they will not know what kills them!" ... Author: ShadowKatake Discord Link: https://discord.gg/xymuEWjYK5

ShadowKatake · Action
4.8
164 Chs

The Heavenly Martial Empress Returns: An OP Xianxia Returnee LitRPG

Have you ever wondered what would happen if the pinnacle of a Xianxia Cultivation Story appears in the middle of a post-apocalyptic system and tower climbing setting, without having lost her powers, unrestrained, and invincible? Bing Xue spent eleven thousand years in the world of Murim, ascending to become the pinnacle after countless hardships, blood, and tears, and sacrificing her own humanity in the process. However, she was incapable of ascending into the Immemorial Primordial Void Realm; incapable of escaping the Heavenly Will's influence, she gambled it all on a single decision, escaping into the Outer Cosmos with her last remaining energies. Despite thinking her long journey was coming to an end, a black hole teleports her back to Earth out of nowhere! However, things on her home planet are much different than before. The Tower now exists, connecting Earth with countless other worlds. Monsters come out of Dimensional Gates, threatening humanity, and awakened people named Players climb the Tower in hopes of saving humanity from destruction. After learning that her mother and her sister are still alive, Bing Xue will use the overwhelming and supreme might she has cultivated for eleven thousand years to destroy the tower, slay the gods that govern it, and save Earth from its untimely demise. The System? She will fold it and make a fashionable scarf with it! The Administrators? They might become her new pets. The Monsters? Nothing but ants that die immediately by merely touching her Immortal Aura. The Hunters? If they behave, she might make them her disciples and teach them to cultivate the Heavenly Dao, so they don’t rely too much on the System. The Hostile Players? Just flies she’ll slap to death with a gentle wave of her hands. And the Gods? Merely aperitives for her ever-growing Divinity! During its serialization, this novel will be available for free forever, no premium. However, you can read advanced chapters here: https://www.patreon.com/pancakeswitch Copyright 2023 PancakesWitch. All rights reserved. No part of this work may be reproduced or used in any manner without the prior written permission of the copyright owner, except for the use of brief quotations in a review. This novel is also being posted on Scribblehub and Royal Road. If you see it anywhere else, please let me know. Thank you.

PancakesWitch · Action
4.9
211 Chs