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DaoistdfuD93
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2023-01-15 03:02

Well, my review is based only on the free chapters since I was not fond of it very much. Grammar and writing are very good and the side characters don't look plain, so you don't have to worry about it. What bothered me was the mc's decisions and the novel's pace. MC's decision: he seems to lack normal life "intuition" since he almost get killed because he was an idiot. The novel's pace: we didn't find anything relevant about the world, since the MC stayed in the same place killing useless beasts which improved him at snail pace. I would understand if he wasn't improving that much in 40 chapters if we were getting good information about the world or an info dump but we got nothing. The only thing we know is all the basics: kill a monster and he drops experience. World-building: I have no comments since there is none, we know nothing about the world besides the same repetitive thing "monster spawning on earth". Analyzing only the free chapters, I can't give you a reason to choose this novel to read. There isn't something special/different about it, it's the same repetitive thing you can find in any other novel. If your intuition says "it is good I wanna pay for the chapters and find out". Do it, you may have a surprise and this may be the best novel you've ever read.

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Well that is because it’s a “accurate” story. He doesn’t know more then he should be able ( they are strong monsters that prevent him from leaving or special stuf to get stronger ). So tell me? How could possibly receive more info without “insane Mc luck”??

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