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IkuSaari
IkuSaariLv132yr
2022-04-29 22:33

Is it even a surprise that Sloth keeps pushing out one jewel after another? Well, it should not be, but I will be coming back to this uplifting and captivating novel many times. The plot is great, the writing style is honed to such high levels that I don't have anything to complain about. BTW great MC.

Leveling Up Wives In The Apocalypse

MotivatedSloth
3.9
410 Chs

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BriGHtOvie341
BriGHtOvie341Lv2

hi my name is Jupiter, and the author of ' more than the ordinary' and would like you to be the first to comment on it

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthor

If the author himself won't give the novel 5 stars, then who would dare to do it? Anyway, a few words about the novel. Release rate: 2ch/day Potential bonus chapters, make me release them, I dare you! The tags that fit the story the most: Harem (duh, but not forced), romance, action, apocalypse and partially kingdom-building? Setting oneself up in the world changed by the apocalypse? You will understand once you get to reading it, so let's move on. The story will contain strong sexual and violent parts, so be advised. It's a book dedicated to adults, after all. All in all, I wish you a great time reading it, and see you in the comments!

2yr

Chouzenfox
ChouzenfoxLv5

MC is just stupid, the people in the background are just NPCs created just to make volume, the decisions made only make sense until 2 lines later where you are explained by the MC himself that this was a stupid decision and it would only bring more problems. He has a system, but that system so far doesn't strengthen him in the least, it strengthens the girls, but even so the MC who describes himself as a skinny wimp, makes a massacre worthy of Rambo to applaud, but treats the girl (who is empowered by the system) as a decoration vase. They have a lot of pauses between attacks, but whenever someone asks for an explanation the MC just tells them to shut up, obey him or a "how do I know", apart from the fact that he never asks if anyone else received a system, explain more about them for his battle companions (NPCs) and the fact that "I saw" or "I did" this or that in the last life, but I don't know how to do it or how it works here!

2yr
MegaSwampertGaming
MegaSwampertGamingLv4

Okay. This is an absolute nightmare. Things make no sense. The action scenes are... trainwrecks. The are explained in ways that make it extremely hard to understand. many things (especially with the merchant) are completely inconsistent and contradictory. The actions of the main character aren't explained, which in itself isn't bad, but when its almost every single action, it just gets confusing. I will praise the concept, because it does seem interesting, but the execution isn't there. Overall, wouldn't recommend.

2yr
PewPewBoomSplash
PewPewBoomSplashLv11

The vivid details and worldbuilding in this story are great! Combine that with the lifelike characters and intriguing dialogue and you end up with a novel that you get absorbed into, losing complete track of time. I only wish for more chapters, keep it up author! I'll be here!

2yr
7ESSE
7ESSELv3

i try to be very unbiased in my reviews and dont usually write reviews but i have to do this for my fellow daoists dont read this chaotic scripture it you will lose your brain cells and will face heart demons its even worse than the demonic scripture known as mtl if u still want to enter this chaotic cultivation path then dont blame me after you get your cultivation crippled

2yr
Nyxus_
Nyxus_Lv14

Good story premise, but not well executed. It feels disjointed and lacks a flow. World is not explained enough, and processes occur with out knowing why?

2yr
MD_Arafat_Alam
MD_Arafat_AlamLv4

It could have been good... so many chapter no development only fking details.... too much fking details. Nothing interesting to pick on...really at first I thought it would be pretty interesting story....but Well read it your own before you decide anything. I was giving my review.

2yr
FloShizu
FloShizuLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

The author tried to create suspense but the story only feels repetative and monotonous. The story is not able to create intrest interest in the first 15 chapters. So dropping out of it.

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