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chkikar_mohamed
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2023-05-13 17:59

Chapter 91 review The novel is good because the progress is relatively fast The world-building and the side characters are also good, the only problem is that the writer limits the growth of the MC, in the secret world is a good opportunity for MC to develop quickly, but the writer decided to turn off the system. Upgrading the talent was immediate, but for no reason, it required a month. What is the significance of a full month at least a day or a week? The biggest problem is that he cannot gain experience from killing monsters. What is the significance of entering the secret world? At least it was possible to accumulate experience for after the upgrade, which was a good opportunity, but it was missed. In general, the novel is good, I recommend it Update Chapter 520 review: It was a promising story, but the progress is a bit slow and there are a lot of chapters that don't make any sense just a lot of talk that you won't remember as the story progresses, on the other hand, the progress of the MC is very slow his biggest advantage is that he can upgrade his talent but he can only bypass it and focus on things Other trivialities I don't know why the writer limits the MCs growth while giving his comrades and enemies stronger cheating abilities. All this can be accepted, but the worst begins after he goes east around chapter 460 I think, we discover that the world is bigger than we imagine and the writer gives the MC a chance to be promoted to the SS rank, but as the chapters progress things become random and the MC is pathetic SS rank and finds Difficulty in killing the rank of S, without talking about the character of the weak like the girl affected by any word, after that the MC gets the ability to absorb abilities, but he does not use it at all only with his sister and his bear and hides his abilities, although he says that he can kill the rank of SSS, which is a ceiling The power on the continent is complete. I do not know how to describe the matter. The story has become only a lick of money. I do not know if the writer has changed or ideas and creativity of him have run out, but he has turned a story with good potential into rubbish. Do not waste your money like me.

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PathSeeker_
PathSeeker_Lv15

Did he eve picked a class?

Kilaske
KilaskeLv6

Yes, but after a very very long time. There wasn't even an instant power up when he chose his class. It felt pointless to have waited that long for nothing. Felt like the author forgot about it and just remembered after a long time.

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Locke_Lamora
Locke_LamoraLv2

Preety sure there was a change in author as the quality of writing had a major drop with plots being randomly thrown in and not being fleshed out. Happened midway onto the witches base. Even the SS rank creature at the 14th floor wasn't mentioned and the fight with the witch happened in 2 sentences. The story then became a documentation or a draft of diffrent plots that could happen.

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subwway_22
subwway_22Lv15

Basically the story itself is extremely enjoyable however I had to reduce points becuase of the occasional bad grammar in the book it’s not super bad but especially in the earlier chapters it is noticeable. Another thing is around chapter 340-370 the story switches to a new group all of a sudden for those chapters which was super irritating and the overall arc 340-370 was apart of was by far the worst part of the book, so I ended up skimming past most of it. However the rest of the book is extremely enjoyable. Also there are some minor time skips in the story however the skips are well placed when the mc has, or is doing that’s about to overstay its welcome, also helps to make the story more logical which I appreciate. The mc himself is ruthless and smart, there hasn’t been I time in the story where has done something dumb, at least from what I remember am currently up to date (chapter 527). None of the side characters are annoying either and the mcs love interest is a decently written character, the system is also good and gives him stuff that is really good but not story breaking. Overall: Slight grammar issues, especially first 100ish chapters, really good story, aside from one arc, solid side characters, really solid mc, world background is logical and follows its rules, author has really well thought out and dealt with any inconsistencies, mc is op but not story breaking, and stuff just makes sense and works. Beginning 10 or so chapters don’t do the best introduction but trust me it’s worth getting thru. The story isn’t super original but the stuff it uses it uses in basically the best way possible.

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