This is not the first time I have read a work that has smooth character development (Since there's too many books that I read that has similar plots or else, but this one is good, ngl). Although the world-building was vague at the start, As the story goes it was gradually revealed. The interactions between the Main Characters are wholesome and the dialogues are so natural that it doesn't feel forced. What I like the most was how the MC constantly tried to improve his techniques and swordsmanship. I'd like to read more, and keep up the good work, Author~!!

Basically the story itself is extremely enjoyable however I had to reduce points becuase of the occasional bad grammar in the book it’s not super bad but especially in the earlier chapters it is noticeable. Another thing is around chapter 340-370 the story switches to a new group all of a sudden for those chapters which was super irritating and the overall arc 340-370 was apart of was by far the worst part of the book, so I ended up skimming past most of it. However the rest of the book is extremely enjoyable. Also there are some minor time skips in the story however the skips are well placed when the mc has, or is doing that’s about to overstay its welcome, also helps to make the story more logical which I appreciate. The mc himself is ruthless and smart, there hasn’t been I time in the story where has done something dumb, at least from what I remember am currently up to date (chapter 527). None of the side characters are annoying either and the mcs love interest is a decently written character, the system is also good and gives him stuff that is really good but not story breaking. Overall: Slight grammar issues, especially first 100ish chapters, really good story, aside from one arc, solid side characters, really solid mc, world background is logical and follows its rules, author has really well thought out and dealt with any inconsistencies, mc is op but not story breaking, and stuff just makes sense and works. Beginning 10 or so chapters don’t do the best introduction but trust me it’s worth getting thru. The story isn’t super original but the stuff it uses it uses in basically the best way possible.

One of my favourite novel so far. i The Mc is smart but it’s not like he knows everything; he is strong but still as weaknesses. He hides his power for good reason and he’s not like going nice on his enemies just to do a switch-arou at the end. The world is well build and it’s note like once he as a certain level of strength everybody aroud him get’s a power up as well. But it´s not perfect, the environment ins´t described enough in my opinion. Some chapter are underwhelming and it’s just description of character. But this point is not much of a problem since you can get the premium chapter for pretty cheaply compare to other way worse novel. So yeah an excellent novet in my opinion. But it is a personal opinion so take everything I say with a grain of salt. btw Autor you should add a romance tag because there is some in it. Ps: sorry for the grammar, english isn’t my main language.

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2M veiws with over 500 chapters, in the top 80 of privilege, but only has 33 reviews???

I only got thru 12 chapters before stopping. I don’t know if it is poor translation or the author doesn’t know which point of view they are writing the story in but it makes it hard to read. On top of the scene jumping it all gets confusing. I feel the potential for the story is great. I love a good OP mc. I just feel there is a lot that isn’t explained. Ope I just magically got an item inventory. Ope pain resistance can be considered a talent. Maybe it gets better in later chapters especially the pov but someone else will have to stick around to find out.

The flow of the story is good, the pacing of the novel is excellent it's neither fast nor slow. It smoothly shows the story in a vivid manner. The stability of updates is also amazing. The author released 2 chapters a week which shows much effort he has put into his work. The plot is only starting so I can't judge it yet, But pieces were coming to each other slowly forming a picture. The Character was fleshed out and had their own personality and traits. The World Background is simple but it's a little bit complicated. Please continue your update! Thank you for the hard work!

When I read this novel, I could tell that it had been written with a lot of care. The characters are very well explained, and you can see exactly what is needed to understand what is going on. You understand the character's motivation for doing certain things, which allows the reader to understand what the character is going through. The system is very well implemented and aids in the progression of the main character without detracting from the story. I would strongly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys a well-written novel with a compelling story.

Everything was okay until chapter 592. There were lots of moments that are bad, but after that chapter everything went downhill. MC felt nerfed and became too emotional. Also felt that he became too much of a chuunibyou after fully starting his own organization.