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Arodicus
ArodicusLv131yr
2023-05-22 15:13

I only got thru 12 chapters before stopping. I don’t know if it is poor translation or the author doesn’t know which point of view they are writing the story in but it makes it hard to read. On top of the scene jumping it all gets confusing. I feel the potential for the story is great. I love a good OP mc. I just feel there is a lot that isn’t explained. Ope I just magically got an item inventory. Ope pain resistance can be considered a talent. Maybe it gets better in later chapters especially the pov but someone else will have to stick around to find out.

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GregLikesBooks
GregLikesBooksLv4

I had issues too...I went a couple chapters beyond that... Determined that it's not for me, but not leaving a review because I haven't read enough for that.

Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

I have the same issues too.. But I managed to reach ch40.. I also love OP MC, but this POV kinda of thing is quite confusing the reader.. Right now, I am not sure whether to continue or just read others' novels.. Maybe I should look for a better OP MC novel and come back here if not find one..

ZelretchTheTaoist
ZelretchTheTaoistLv3

if you're interested I'm also writing a xianxia webnovel if you have the time you can come take a look and leave a comment on what you think about it

Arodicus
ArodicusLv13

I don’t mind reading and reviewing for people. I checked your page and only see 2 works. I don’t generally read romance novels but could give it a shot if it’s xiaxia just let me know which work it is.

ZelretchTheTaoist:if you're interested I'm also writing a xianxia webnovel if you have the time you can come take a look and leave a comment on what you think about it
ZelretchTheTaoist
ZelretchTheTaoistLv3

machination king in cultivation world

Arodicus:I don’t mind reading and reviewing for people. I checked your page and only see 2 works. I don’t generally read romance novels but could give it a shot if it’s xiaxia just let me know which work it is.
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subwway_22
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Basically the story itself is extremely enjoyable however I had to reduce points becuase of the occasional bad grammar in the book it’s not super bad but especially in the earlier chapters it is noticeable. Another thing is around chapter 340-370 the story switches to a new group all of a sudden for those chapters which was super irritating and the overall arc 340-370 was apart of was by far the worst part of the book, so I ended up skimming past most of it. However the rest of the book is extremely enjoyable. Also there are some minor time skips in the story however the skips are well placed when the mc has, or is doing that’s about to overstay its welcome, also helps to make the story more logical which I appreciate. The mc himself is ruthless and smart, there hasn’t been I time in the story where has done something dumb, at least from what I remember am currently up to date (chapter 527). None of the side characters are annoying either and the mcs love interest is a decently written character, the system is also good and gives him stuff that is really good but not story breaking. Overall: Slight grammar issues, especially first 100ish chapters, really good story, aside from one arc, solid side characters, really solid mc, world background is logical and follows its rules, author has really well thought out and dealt with any inconsistencies, mc is op but not story breaking, and stuff just makes sense and works. Beginning 10 or so chapters don’t do the best introduction but trust me it’s worth getting thru. The story isn’t super original but the stuff it uses it uses in basically the best way possible.

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