So incredibly repetitive. All the girls are in love with the protag, all in the same way. Maybe it's just because it's too early, and you can very well say that, but I don't care. I would honestly prefer if it was something like a tragedy/psychological novel, where protag is alone in the world with no one on his side. It would be edgy and emo(probably), but I would still prefer that over this. Too bad such a novel doesn't seem to exist. So if you're looking for a casual, borderline brainless read, then this is for you. The grammers nice though. I haven't noticed any odd sentences at all. That's all you really need to know. The rest of this review was written by me for my own amusement. Read it if you want, but it's not good/helpful or polished. Short summary, basically protag had to act as a villain in a novel cuz a system wanted him to. However after dying he has to do it again for some reason. Here's the catch though, basically every single character thats female with a name fell in love with protag and got reincarnated. That's not even a joke. Every single female with a name. And the reasons they fell in love with protag aren't even that good either. Things how they've been watching him for years and fell in love. Don't get me wrong, if it's once or twice then it can absolutely be creative. When it's like 10 or whatever amount of heroines this stories going to have though, it just comes across as lazy. Who am I kidding. It's probably going to be like 1000 different heroines. Anyway, so they love protag. Not like a light crush or anything, but basically a yandere type thing. I'm not against yanderes at all, in some cases they're actually pretty nice, but it's kind of ridiculous here. Not sure why but they just irk me. Maybe it's because they're all the same in terms of how they love him. They hate the original mc of the novel(in fact they all conspired to kill him in their past life. One lady even sacrificed millions of lives to do it or something. That's just douchy. Like seriously. I'm going to go off on tangent so skip if you don't care. It reminds me of this other novel where the protag is a spy or something but he gets betrayed. He has a final card up his sleeve though, and that's to literally blow up bombs he's set everywhere. It doesn't even make sense. Like nuke level. Like demolish the entire world, killing billions in seconds. Why? To get back at like three people. It's so annoying. It's so lazy. The protag doesn't even feel regret as he floats in a sea of souls, murdered by him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is, it's just so douchy. God that made me so mad. Honestly I've got a incredibly filthy mouth in terms of swearing, or at least used to(league of legends level), but I can't even use it. God.), and blindly love the protag. It's very noticable as well, at least to the protag. But just one word from the system and he lets it go. I don't feel like doing this review anymore, so peace.
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LIKEOh and don't let this review discourage you. As mentioned in your own review, people will love or hate it. I wouldn't say I hate this, but I certainly don't like it. Honestly I'm just so jaded since I've read so many novels in the past year or two that basically anything I read I think is bad. I'm not even joking. I spend hours just looking for a novel to read most days. Because of that, I'm an exception. A tough customer, so to speak. But as you can probably tell, there are other people who genuinely enjoy this, so you're doing something right. Besides, I don't even write reviews for most things I read. Who knows, maybe theres something attracting me to this story. Eh, I don't know. You really should add some sort of variety to your novel though. Maybe have some other aspect to the story as well. What I mean by that is don't just have the whole story be along the lines of meet heroine, protag and heroine(s) talk or something, protag and heroine separate, repeat. Because at least in my eyes, that's how the story is right now. Your writings(as in grammar) genuinely great though. I haven't scoured through it, looking for errors, and I'm no english teacher, but I haven't read so much for nothing. I don't think I'll continue watching this novel, but good luck all the same.
No worries, I'm not disencouraged by it, on the contrary I appreciate you putting your time and effort into making this review. This is my first novel after all so in terms of writing and making a story, I'm aware that I'm pretty horrible at it, so getting constructive criticisms like this really helps a lot. As for some of the things you have mentioned, I don't plan on just making the protagonist do the same thing over and over again (meeting new heroines, face slapping protagonists, etc), I just love misunderstanding tropes but even I can tell after about 4 plots in it's starting to get repetitive, so I'll go edit in some of my unreleased chapters and try and change it up. Once again, thanks for the feedback!
RR_KK:Oh and don't let this review discourage you. As mentioned in your own review, people will love or hate it. I wouldn't say I hate this, but I certainly don't like it. Honestly I'm just so jaded since I've read so many novels in the past year or two that basically anything I read I think is bad. I'm not even joking. I spend hours just looking for a novel to read most days. Because of that, I'm an exception. A tough customer, so to speak. But as you can probably tell, there are other people who genuinely enjoy this, so you're doing something right. Besides, I don't even write reviews for most things I read. Who knows, maybe theres something attracting me to this story. Eh, I don't know. You really should add some sort of variety to your novel though. Maybe have some other aspect to the story as well. What I mean by that is don't just have the whole story be along the lines of meet heroine, protag and heroine(s) talk or something, protag and heroine separate, repeat. Because at least in my eyes, that's how the story is right now. Your writings(as in grammar) genuinely great though. I haven't scoured through it, looking for errors, and I'm no english teacher, but I haven't read so much for nothing. I don't think I'll continue watching this novel, but good luck all the same.
your review is informative, although I would still read because I love this type of cliché
I mean, it's Chinese. And the CCP has pretty much stripped them of any kind of humanity or virtue of any form. As communism always does.
