Review Detail of yokedjaguar in HP: What would you do if you were Snape in his time at Hogwarts?

My only problem with the ff is that the author drags parts of the of the story on to the point of repeating himself over and over again. I understand if you need filler but if you make the story feel so monotonous, it doest feel like a well read book. It happens so often I started skipping the endings of paragraphs or if I saw skimmed ahead a little and saw that it was also I repeat I just flat out skipped the paragraph. To put simply, until the ff isn't a monotonous repeat of itself I won't advise people to read it unless your into that type of stuff. Lastly the conversations could use a little work, again it feels as if everyone is a robot.