Thanks for the chapter. You release a chapter almost every day, how long does it take you? Do you have the whole story planned out already?

There's no rush. It's just hard to gauge how strong his clones are. It might even be better to keep it vague for now, hard statements of power can become a trap.

It would be nice to know how far along the MC is in terms of ninja arts. Example, earlier Itachi and Kakashi said he was barely a first year academy student, which is fair. But how is his physical strength, speed, and endurance? Or Chakra.

Agreed, people tend to confuse the two.

The worst variant is when the child is not even yours but you are told that it is. So you get the privilege of staying with a cheating partner, and raise someone else's children.

Thanks for all the chapters, I enjoyed the pace. The physical development of the MC was odd, but it makes sense for him to relish his childhood and family. The use of clones too has been really interesting. I don't mind, but things seem to be going too well for him. I don't like forced conflict, so clever planning and superior power overcoming obstacles is fine, but please avoid a catastrophic event just for character development.

Every chapter feels like a cliffhanger because I'm so invested. Thanks for the chapter.

Would have been funny if he had.

I saw people complaining about the pace, but the only reason I'm upset is that there are so few chapters. Be as slow as you want with the story as long as I get 1000 chapters a day. You are taking the time to flesh out relationships, instead of killing off the parents immediately and making the MC an EMO loner whose only interaction is for the purpose of fluff.

The issue is rarely the sharing itself, but it depends on the nature of the verse. Some worlds don't take kindly to dimensional aliens. Or sharing stupidly, even if there is no controller force purging intrusions.

Not only that, but the whole point of Asimov's books is that the laws don't even work in the story.

Poor man, the cruel arc of lightning killed the cozy fire he had going on at home.

Very considerate way to give feedback, I'll try to learn from you.

Exciting development,

Don't worry, we forgive you.

Interesting deviation, kudos for taking the chance.

Yeah, but there is no canon statement that Sharingan, EMS or otherwise increases physical abilities beyond ability to perceive and learn. Sasuke got slapped by Lee because of that. No boost to speed, strength, endurance, regeneration, etc.

That is not fair, if the premise is not interesting, then don't read. Or at least give them feedback on writing, worldbuilding, etc.

It's not for everyone, the MC is very dark and seems at times needlessly cruel, but so far the author has done an excellent job with the story. There's a payoff for every choice, even the ones that seem bad at the time. Worldbuilding is excellent, he uses the Byakugan creatively and gives it its deserved spot as an equal of the Sharingan. Imagine if Orochimaru did not get fixated on the Sharingan, the stuff he could accomplish with the Byakugan, combined with meta-knowledge of the verse gives the MC a lot of potential. Downsides: The MC has internal monologues, which might be a story point, if not they add little to the story. The relationships are shallow, the MC exploits everyone so there is possessiveness on her part, but no real depth in the relationships. It is most obvious in her relationship with her mother.

Hinata would never lie, so far she has been a paragon of virtue.