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Burning_Regrets
Burning_RegretsLv32yr
2022-07-19 04:49

I don't know how to write a proper review so I'ma just rant. The story is fun and does something I don't see often, they show how they grow from birth and how they interact with there family. unlike quite a few stories you can see there family and who they are. there is some plot armour but nothing too unreal with how the story goes. ♾️ MP is going to be crazy no matter how you make it unless you make them a swordsman only and then that's a waist. fun thing in this is the mc is practical and thinks about there actions for more then 2 steps ahead of themselves (literally 2 steps ahead). the mc can be reckless and a little crazy but that just makes them fun. there is a lot of racism but the mc has a great A+ support network and you get to see them have a good life for a bit. overall the story is good, has a good update time that is very consistent. you need a privilege to read the last few chapters but that is just a boost and are at most 10 days ahead. I think I spotted a few misspelled words but I would not be able to pinpoint them but they are few and far in-between. the characters are good and are not going to do a 270° change 5 times in 3 seconds unless they are acting. the story develops at a good pace and won't find 18 chapters dedicated to 1 day / fight. you learn about the world the same time the mc does so if it's a surprise to the mc it is to you as well.

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Igris_Sama
Igris_SamaLv2

is it yuri?

maryjane_sardalla
maryjane_sardallaLv1

hmmm

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

Yuri?

Aquele_QUE
Aquele_QUELv1

no

Igris_Sama:is it yuri?
Aquele_QUE
Aquele_QUELv1

no

Haku_Ouroboros:Yuri?
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