At the risk of being hammered by invayne fans, I wanted to write this review. Like pretty much all of invayne's novels, this one suffers from poor pacing, poorly thought out power escalations, and characters getting constantly introduced and then barely paid attention too. Spoilers to follow. Adel and Sophie go from interesting characters to 2D paper cutout waifus, just like most harem novels. A demon is introduced, and then another, only for them to suddenly be thrust out as possible love interests. The "stakes" go from bandits to corrupt nobles, to world ending machinery in some very short chapters. and I mean very short. There's a lot of chapters, but not a lot of content because most of it is repeated and ranted about, especially by the MC Faith. This brings about another problem. Faith and her life goes from silly to deadly serious and back again at breakneck speed. I was constantly experiencing "narrative whiplash" as we go from "rescue someone you love" to "haha, silly cuddles" all at the same time. I will give them credit where it's due, the writing style and quality is pretty good with only a few errors here and there, and the updates are consistent and constant. I think the updates are probably due to the fact that Webnovel pushes writers to keep doing so to keep their novel relevant, highly rated, and therefore profitable. I won't fault any writer for that, especially not one who is a decent writer and has a passion for their novel, which I think invayne does have. In summary: Keep doing your best invayne, don't let my opinion change you, it's just your novels are not for me. And all of that is after I spent so much time reading, lol.
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