Hello there my fellow brothers, who seek to prolong and expand their journey in the Gu World.
1. Let's start with 'Writing Quality'. This aspect of the story is done really well. Style of writing is similar to RI and in my opinion it's a great advantage of this fic, since you can feel that progression of story takes place in the same cold, unforgiving and so familiar to us world of RI.
Though it must be said, tha author didn't just tried to imitate Gu Zhen Ren's style, but added his own touch to it.
(Yes, there were few moments in the story, which maybe could have been done better, but it doesn't really affect whole work + It's not very critical).
2. To be short about updates: they're on time and stable.
3. Frankly speaking, 37 chapters is miniscule amount of content (drop in ocean to be exact), if we want to draw accurate and not shallow conclusion. But considering a tempo of events happening along the way, I'll allow myself to say that development of a story is great.
4. I think design of characters is done pretty good, but when again to truly see their depth and make final say about them, we'd need to wait a liitle bit more, still this part of the story is solid and actions of characters are logical and don't contradict with their personalities.
5. World buiding is done well, even considering pace of the story, style of writing allows author to create a beautiful background along with a complicated polical situation within a clan.
In the end, I want to say: Good job! The fic isn't stupidly made and story has enougth potential to truly bloom and to become amazing tale to read and enjoy. Really enjoyed this story so far and I'll will be waiting for more.
