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OrigamiGuyII
OrigamiGuyIILv113yr
2022-03-10 23:57

This looks so promising. I love the idea of mortal cultivation with the comprehension of Dao a Rank 8 Gu Immortal has accumulated. I can't wait to see where you take this.

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ThunderTaters
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Glad you like it so far! Don't worry MC will not have an easy time even with his skills and knowledge, the gu world is not that forgiving.

Sr_Yy
Sr_YyLv2

To read this do you need to read RI?

ThunderTaters:Glad you like it so far! Don't worry MC will not have an easy time even with his skills and knowledge, the gu world is not that forgiving.
ThunderTaters
ThunderTatersAuthor

Not strictly required, as I briefly explain things when they come up. But the primary audience is those who already read RI.

Sr_Yy:To read this do you need to read RI?
Sr_Yy
Sr_YyLv2

I have wanted to read RI but it dropped

ThunderTaters:Not strictly required, as I briefly explain things when they come up. But the primary audience is those who already read RI.
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Bored_Venerable
Bored_VenerableLv4

You make it sound like you want to give him hard time on purpose

ThunderTaters:Glad you like it so far! Don't worry MC will not have an easy time even with his skills and knowledge, the gu world is not that forgiving.
ThunderTaters
ThunderTatersAuthor

Cognition Gu: "Human, oh human, you walked in the footsteps of other existences, although this road is simple and safe, if you want to become extraordinary, and walk out of ordinary abyss, there is little hope if you follow other people's trails. Since you walked on your own road of life, all the difficulties need to be challenged by you personally, you need to innovate and carve out your own footprints."

Bored_Venerable:You make it sound like you want to give him hard time on purpose
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ALonelyDaoist
ALonelyDaoistLv1

Hello there my fellow brothers, who seek to prolong and expand their journey in the Gu World. 1. Let's start with 'Writing Quality'. This aspect of the story is done really well. Style of writing is similar to RI and in my opinion it's a great advantage of this fic, since you can feel that progression of story takes place in the same cold, unforgiving and so familiar to us world of RI. Though it must be said, tha author didn't just tried to imitate Gu Zhen Ren's style, but added his own touch to it. (Yes, there were few moments in the story, which maybe could have been done better, but it doesn't really affect whole work + It's not very critical). 2. To be short about updates: they're on time and stable. 3. Frankly speaking, 37 chapters is miniscule amount of content (drop in ocean to be exact), if we want to draw accurate and not shallow conclusion. But considering a tempo of events happening along the way, I'll allow myself to say that development of a story is great. 4. I think design of characters is done pretty good, but when again to truly see their depth and make final say about them, we'd need to wait a liitle bit more, still this part of the story is solid and actions of characters are logical and don't contradict with their personalities. 5. World buiding is done well, even considering pace of the story, style of writing allows author to create a beautiful background along with a complicated polical situation within a clan. In the end, I want to say: Good job! The fic isn't stupidly made and story has enougth potential to truly bloom and to become amazing tale to read and enjoy. Really enjoyed this story so far and I'll will be waiting for more.

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