Oh, I knew this from Reddit RI group, so CharredPotato's work is on webnovel too, anyways, Auto support from fellow RI enthusiast...........

Tiis work is really great , Auther has taken his time in thinking about the plot very well . The chapter are longer than usual which is good cosidering the somewhat long time between every chapter and the great quality of the work itself. Thanks for making a great art for others to see ❤️.

Brilliant, this Ri fanfiction is simply brilliant. There are many things I like about this fanfiction, the main character is likable and knows what he is doing. The plot is good, the writing style is also somewhat similar to Ri( another plus for me). This fan fiction has retained majority of essence from the original Ri. The author is really hard-working and talented, another plus. And It's glorified Ri fanfiction, the biggest plus. Negative: with a gun pointed at my head, I'll say this; the update rate isn't all that satisfactory, but I can't really complain. After all, the author isn't really making a living out of this(Idk really, are u). And not to mention, making good content isn't as easy as it seems, but we still need more(I am greedy) So that's that, all in all, it's pretty good Fan Fiction. I hope one day, you create a masterpiece of your own(not fanfiction)

This looks so promising. I love the idea of mortal cultivation with the comprehension of Dao a Rank 8 Gu Immortal has accumulated. I can't wait to see where you take this.

The story is truly great but i only have one dislike about this, it has too much side character story 🤣just like in the original ri

I, your Grandfather, applaud your work. My attainment in the reader path has finally reached grandmaster level because of your profound plot and characters. Keep up the good work junior.

Hello there my fellow brothers, who seek to prolong and expand their journey in the Gu World. 1. Let's start with 'Writing Quality'. This aspect of the story is done really well. Style of writing is similar to RI and in my opinion it's a great advantage of this fic, since you can feel that progression of story takes place in the same cold, unforgiving and so familiar to us world of RI. Though it must be said, tha author didn't just tried to imitate Gu Zhen Ren's style, but added his own touch to it. (Yes, there were few moments in the story, which maybe could have been done better, but it doesn't really affect whole work + It's not very critical). 2. To be short about updates: they're on time and stable. 3. Frankly speaking, 37 chapters is miniscule amount of content (drop in ocean to be exact), if we want to draw accurate and not shallow conclusion. But considering a tempo of events happening along the way, I'll allow myself to say that development of a story is great. 4. I think design of characters is done pretty good, but when again to truly see their depth and make final say about them, we'd need to wait a liitle bit more, still this part of the story is solid and actions of characters are logical and don't contradict with their personalities. 5. World buiding is done well, even considering pace of the story, style of writing allows author to create a beautiful background along with a complicated polical situation within a clan. In the end, I want to say: Good job! The fic isn't stupidly made and story has enougth potential to truly bloom and to become amazing tale to read and enjoy. Really enjoyed this story so far and I'll will be waiting for more.

Looks good for now. keep up ........................................................................... .....................................................

I rly like it. Good luck an hope u have fun writing this:) D