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BryndenRiversLv131yr
2023-07-31 06:57

Annoying snarky system, an MC with absolutely no drive willpower or self confidence, seriously slow leveling up, and constant failed missions. Honestly I'm only still reading it because some people say it gets better, but the MC is pathetic if he is this lazy and still expects to succeed in pro football. I just don't see the appeal in reading about a loser failing challenges even when he has a cheat like system. The romance is ok but feels pretty flat as well. All in all, I'd say read it if you are really wanting a sports novel. Skip it if you want to read a novel with an MC worthy of his system.

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BryndenRiversLv13

Also the majority of this story is the MC watching his teammates, who are actually good players, play football while he just fails constantly. It's annoying and way too drawn out. I mean, c'mon... how are you gonna have an MC with a system still be the worst player on the field??? Zero growth from Dave, near zero progress in his fitness and skills, and absolutely zero moments where you actually like the MC.

Haku_OuroborosLv11

Do you recommend any other football novels? (Google translate)

BryndenRivers:Also the majority of this story is the MC watching his teammates, who are actually good players, play football while he just fails constantly. It's annoying and way too drawn out. I mean, c'mon... how are you gonna have an MC with a system still be the worst player on the field??? Zero growth from Dave, near zero progress in his fitness and skills, and absolutely zero moments where you actually like the MC.
BryndenRiversLv13

The only good football one I can think of would be "The Greatest of All Time" by: Mujunel the Mystic. Even that one is just constant training scenes but it's at least rewarding and the main character is successful. Sadly it's on hiatus right now...

Haku_Ouroboros:Do you recommend any other football novels? (Google translate)
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