Hello, everyone, it's the author here to drop an appreciation review after reaching 300 chapters, the novel didn't start out well but I'm doing my best to tie up all loose ends and I hope you guys are seeing it get better, a big thank you to everyone for all your support, that's the main thing that keeps me going.
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LIKEI just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...
postpill:I have being at it for close to 7 hours now and I can say it worth the hype.
oh about that I stopped again after chp66 totally forgot 😅 to edit this.
BryndenRivers:I just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...
Well, you're just 70 chapters in, this was my first novel so I made a couple of mistakes I wish I avoided, anyway the novel gets better especially from the second volume but it's your choice if you want to read on or not.
BryndenRivers:I just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...
And also, the answer to all those questions is yes.
BryndenRivers:I just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...