Item: My Goalkeeping System
Rating: 5
Author: Franklin_Nwakamma

Franklin_NwakammaAuthor2yr

2023-03-12 06:44

Hello, everyone, it's the author here to drop an appreciation review after reaching 300 chapters, the novel didn't start out well but I'm doing my best to tie up all loose ends and I hope you guys are seeing it get better, a big thank you to everyone for all your support, that's the main thing that keeps me going.

My Goalkeeping System

Franklin_Nwakamma

4.1

544 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies9

postpillLv6

it has been months since I dropped this book, but webnovel so let give it another chance will be back soon to give a proper review.

1yr

Franklin_NwakammaAuthor

I hope you enjoy it.

postpill:it has been months since I dropped this book, but webnovel so let give it another chance will be back soon to give a proper review.

1yr

postpillLv6

I have being at it for close to 7 hours now and I can say it worth the hype.

Franklin_Nwakamma:I hope you enjoy it.

1yr

Franklin_NwakammaAuthor

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

postpill:I have being at it for close to 7 hours now and I can say it worth the hype.

1yr

BryndenRiversLv13

I just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...

postpill:I have being at it for close to 7 hours now and I can say it worth the hype.

1yr

postpillLv6

oh about that I stopped again after chp66 totally forgot 😅 to edit this.

BryndenRivers:I just can not believe this comment. How does it get better? Does Dave start taking his job seriously? Do they start winning any games? Does he ever complete a system quest? Do we get to see more football instead of pages and pages of bland, cardboard like "romance"? I am 70+ chapters into this story and nothing has improved a bit. It's still garbage and I just for the life of me can't see how this author improves at all...

1yr

postpillLv6

but even at that he has actually started showing improvement 🤔just that I was looking for something different

postpill:oh about that I stopped again after chp66 totally forgot 😅 to edit this.

1yr

Franklin_NwakammaAuthor

Well, you're just 70 chapters in, this was my first novel so I made a couple of mistakes I wish I avoided, anyway the novel gets better especially from the second volume but it's your choice if you want to read on or not.

1yr

Franklin_NwakammaAuthor

And also, the answer to all those questions is yes.

1yr

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Franklin_NwakammaAuthor

Shameless author review here. This is first time writing a sports novel so don't expect this to be a super novel although I am a super football fan so I am sure of what I am doing. My grammar isn't great but I'm pretty sure it's readable and I try my best to minimise errors. Drop any questions you need answers to🥰

2yr

Loneee_3Lv4

i never thought of writing a review here nor did give one before but this novel deserves one. first of all the novel is amazing it refreshing to read. it's not like other novel where the MC would get skills and be super strong, here it's a bit different it's neither a OP one nor a sloppy one, it's the best for that situation. And the other thing i liked in this novel was romance even tho it's not much but i like those sweet moments. Even tho there are few bugs coming in between their relationship both MC and FMC are swatting those bugs away and i do hope that author won't make any changes to their relationship especially cheating, NTR, etc it would be worst. i think that's it. Thanks for the novel and hope u keep up the good work👍👍

2yr

trueidiocy_577Lv4

Too much unnecessary drama and lack of drive. I just want to read a football fic man, not some sappy romance :')

2yr

ijxnakmalLv5

Goalkeeper system or watching football system? read until chapter 14 and drop because author keep writing about MC watching football game only.

2yr

LinhMieuLv4

Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.

2yr

StoneBreaker97Lv14

A bit of a missed opportunity with the is one. Read 30 chapters, way too little progress and way too much time spent with the gf.

2yr

Mister_RobotLv4

The mc has the personality of a cardboard. The story remains stagnant on the MC and his love interest's romance. One of the worst sports novel in webnovel. wouldn't recommend it to anybody

1yr

CarsonRome_432Lv3

Not bad, although I feel like its lacking a bit in the action part. Its really good though for someone who likes the soccer genre. Update faster and I'll drop Powerstones everyday

2yr

BryndenRiversLv13

Annoying snarky system, an MC with absolutely no drive willpower or self confidence, seriously slow leveling up, and constant failed missions. Honestly I'm only still reading it because some people say it gets better, but the MC is pathetic if he is this lazy and still expects to succeed in pro football. I just don't see the appeal in reading about a loser failing challenges even when he has a cheat like system. The romance is ok but feels pretty flat as well. All in all, I'd say read it if you are really wanting a sports novel. Skip it if you want to read a novel with an MC worthy of his system.

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