Shameless author review here. This is first time writing a sports novel so don't expect this to be a super novel although I am a super football fan so I am sure of what I am doing. My grammar isn't great but I'm pretty sure it's readable and I try my best to minimise errors. Drop any questions you need answers to🥰
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LIKEThanks for the suggestions, I'll try my best.
TrackShadow:some suggestions 1. moderate pace 2. shows his personal life too 3. dont go into romance until the mid of the novel. 4. it would be better if it is in the real world 5. set some challenges from the system r real life where he loses 6. rise in confidence with character buildup
From the sypnosis, is that all the MC is gonna be? Just a pro? Not a legend or the best goal keeper the world had ever seen? If he’s just gonna be a pro then please let me know. I’m not here to see someone become regular like the rest of world but to see someone conquer it and leave a mark. So please tell me, it would save a lot of my time.
Pro is just the base, he's going to be great but I don't think you'll like the way he began.
samuel_A:From the sypnosis, is that all the MC is gonna be? Just a pro? Not a legend or the best goal keeper the world had ever seen? If he’s just gonna be a pro then please let me know. I’m not here to see someone become regular like the rest of world but to see someone conquer it and leave a mark. So please tell me, it would save a lot of my time.
Dave is annoying and stupid and doesn't listen when the system is trying to help him. I swear if you plan on doing another sports novel, please do a smarter person who wants to be the best. Dave is not him it's best to kill him off he just pathetic trash no matter who tries to help him.
Franklin_Nwakamma:In the early chapters yeah, but he's really improved in the current chapters
I know, I learnt a lot from this one given that it's my sports novel so the next one will be better but, if you continue, it gets better down the line.
RyuSenju:Dave is annoying and stupid and doesn't listen when the system is trying to help him. I swear if you plan on doing another sports novel, please do a smarter person who wants to be the best. Dave is not him it's best to kill him off he just pathetic trash no matter who tries to help him.image