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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv142yr
2022-03-04 18:23

The grammar is near incomprehensible

Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

Evans_Duality
4.6
97 Chs

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VMoto
VMotoLv6

No. Its pretty good.

2yr
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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

That was a pretty good joke.

VMoto:No. Its pretty good.
2yr
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Fenrirzero999
Fenrirzero999Lv13

I think it’s good

2yr
67
Fenrirzero999
Fenrirzero999Lv13

Stop trach talking

2yr
52
KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14

It’s been improving with every chapter. Even the last chapter had hardly any mistakes compared to the first couple.

2yr
79
Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

Ok

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2yr
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achearon
achearonLv15

ur pretty dumb ain't ya

Darnelljoe:Ok
2yr
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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

Not as dumb as you.

achearon:ur pretty dumb ain't ya
2yr
27
Zekril
ZekrilLv4

Yhee because you're worst than him.

Darnelljoe:Not as dumb as you.
2yr
13
Blaz3r
Blaz3rLv14

Bro i read it all so far, I don’t know why you’re complaining when the writing is better than 90% of the novels on this website and its very readable.

2yr
72
Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

Let's say you're correct, being better than 90% garbage is still garbage in the end.

Blaz3r:Bro i read it all so far, I don’t know why you’re complaining when the writing is better than 90% of the novels on this website and its very readable.
2yr
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LokeErBest
LokeErBestLv14

You're* not "ur"

achearon:ur pretty dumb ain't ya
2yr
19
LokeErBest
LokeErBestLv14

Trash talking*, A for effort though.

Fenrirzero999:Stop trach talking
2yr
25
LokeErBest
LokeErBestLv14

Please, learn English.

Zekril:Yhee because you're worst than him.
2yr
36
CassTheEevee
CassTheEeveeLv14

you say it's pretty good then can't even spell trash

Fenrirzero999:Stop trach talking
2yr
25
Dark_Wiz
Dark_WizLv4

it's indeed not up to mark in beginning but it's improving pretty quickly so we can overlook that since story is good

2yr
14
Grand_White10
Grand_White10Lv11

Are you just trash talking or looking for something to pick on in this story??

Darnelljoe:Let's say you're correct, being better than 90% garbage is still garbage in the end.
2yr
12
L_y_n_x
L_y_n_xLv12

I commend the author for letting such idiotic reviews stay up. If I was him I'd take down all the pointless hate comments

2yr
21
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

Tbh, the synopsis doesn’t provide any assurance considering how poorly it’s worded.. but still you’re pretty on the spot with how strongly people feel against this review 😅

L_y_n_x:I commend the author for letting such idiotic reviews stay up. If I was him I'd take down all the pointless hate comments
2yr
15
Kapuchinik
KapuchinikLv5

Not funny I guess. Some comments under ur review are dark….

Darnelljoe:That was a pretty good joke.
2yr
1
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AvatarLOK2
AvatarLOK2Lv3

Dude, your writing is interesting keeps me occupied, and is also very different from all the other marvel fanfictions before this. I really enjoyed the character-building as you made him very human unlike many fanfic writers not to discourage any of their works.

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StarGazerr
StarGazerrLv4

man, you just threw everything in the trash with bnha arc...................................................................................

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Kiradeux
KiradeuxLv13

Things were fairly enjoyable until the author decided to go down the psychopath power collection route instead of progressive gacha gain. Feels like a huge waste of potential, but the MC just feels like discount All For One now. The decision effectively threw the entire context of the story and threw it in the trash - Meta Essence no longer required, Gacha is a write off since he easily steals whatever power he wants and is thus easily ignored in the plot, heck, they're not even in Marvel anymore! If you like the common power collection stories where the MC runs around stealing everyone's powers so fast that he could never train them all, then this story is better than average in the category.

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Rylne
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MHA Arc so badddd. ¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯¯\(◉‿◉)/¯

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TempestDrift
TempestDriftLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6

This is a really good marvel fanfic with the MC having powers from different works of fiction. here's a list of things that the author did which i personally liked and made read this fanfic. 1. The MC is very well described and etched you can understand his motives and goals (though the goal is really simply to not be thanos snapped) 2. He is an anti hero type character (MC) but wont hesitate to do what is required for him to get stronger. 3. BIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD BIG SPOILER AHEADBIG SPOILER AHEAD He got the character template of Batman so yeah i freaking love this fic 😆.

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EaCalibur
EaCaliburLv5

The story is good. I am writing this so that the ratings can improve. I don't like the ratings it has now(4.34),& I can't write any useful reviews anyway.

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