KoroSensei14

Tftc Good start but find it hard to believe that with all their powers and the scepter pietro would die like that.

Love the story so far don’t really have any complaints the only things holding the story back in my opinion are the lack of interaction between universes for a multiversal story and the fact the MC doesn’t really have any powers but both thoose things are something I can already see happening in the future I just got to be patient and wait for them. One idea I had but might honestly ruin the down to earth feel of the story would have been for mc to gain access to a worlds power system whenever he gets a new door for example when he connected to HP world he becomes a mage he would just have to train from the ground up himself or use the store to but knowledge. Mc could also just buy magic from the store if he wanted it which makes the idea redundant but he’s to broke from spending all his money on gacha.

Tftc is kapui dead or was he captured?

The same thing happened to me the last couple chapters.

Tftc wondering what Cedric motive is feel like if he knew about the trap he could have just avoided it there was no need to set it off unless he wanted to be malicious. Which make me think that this story is going to turn into one where the mc travels the multiverse to hunt down reincarnatiors/transmigrators and that’s how he becomes an angel of death by hunting down those that should have stayed dead and not taken over others bodies.

TFTC. Trying to trust the process but not a big fan of tragedys especially when a bunch of 13-15 year old were killed majority of them making up a big portion of the named characters from the movies and books. I get that without consequences it can be hard to add depth and character development just didnt expect the story to give a gut punch out of left field like that was thinking cedric was just a transmigrator trying to horde some resources now its gone secret full blown murderer/theif. hoping theres some sort of resolution at the end of the arc for some closure or maybe reviving the deceased in some way but thats probably a long shot.

And aziraphel appears. Loved good omens I was waiting for him to make his appearance him and Crowley have one of the best dynamics in tv.

One of the most well written fanfictions on this site all the characters are well fleshed out and the integration between the mcu movies and the greater whole of marvel (x-men, F4) is seamless. Looking forward to more chapters.

Take your time good luck with your studies.

Good start. AU world? Corlys should have been born a lot earlier and there was no summer fever that year in lore. But it is a fanfic so I’m guessing there will be some changes.