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Caveman21Lv152yr
2022-03-21 17:19

It’s only the start but I’ve been hooked. The author has given a nice fresh take on the genre that works really well. The characters are independent and unique, and so far the novel seems well thought out. I still don’t have a clue what the overarching purpose of the story is yet, but I’m enjoying it this far. (Chap 30)

My legendary class is Husband Of Deathwill Sisters?!

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G0d_4174Lv13

This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.

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MirageaLv14

I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.

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sincLv15

Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting. Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.

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AsurasTearLv13

mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank you your sincere reader

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Ueiejejdue73737rjLv2

Okay, my review could be called unfair as I only read 4 chapters. But it just doesn't make sense. He picks a sword and jump to the skeletons in his first time in a VRG, he also explains he wasn't afraid of them because he has Battle Mode, like if his real life also had skills and fight in the streets to learn his skills(nothing of that was explained, nor how the Battle mode). Also, the no fear made no sense. Then in the same 1.- day and just after like 2 hours he already has perfect swordmanship(he is the successor of the style) to do perfect moves, fight a captain skeleton and do 999,999 dmg in one atk. I just don't get it, nor the life and past of our MC or the fact that he do like 2 months of game play in a normal rpg in less than 3 hours and learning to use a sword perfectly without any experience. I really have no idea how people give perfect scores and reviews here where perfection doesn't even exist.

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HeavenlyAzureLotusLv14

This is probably in the top 3 most enjoyable harem novels I’ve read. The main selling point being the charcters actually feel real. Each FMC has personaility, motivation, goals and feelings which creates realistic feeling interactions, all of which are enjoyable. The action is good, the romance is great, the story overall is fantastic. Stop reading other harem trash where girls have 2 brain cells and tap into this marvelous story.

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Hitman23Lv11

One of the best Harem novels I've read yet, where the character doesn't mindlessly increase his harem. Perfect balance between romance and action. Highly recommend.

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