This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.

I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.

Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting. Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.

mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank you your sincere reader

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This is probably in the top 3 most enjoyable harem novels I’ve read. The main selling point being the charcters actually feel real. Each FMC has personaility, motivation, goals and feelings which creates realistic feeling interactions, all of which are enjoyable. The action is good, the romance is great, the story overall is fantastic. Stop reading other harem trash where girls have 2 brain cells and tap into this marvelous story.

One of the best Harem novels I've read yet, where the character doesn't mindlessly increase his harem. Perfect balance between romance and action. Highly recommend.

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