webnovel
CephJester
CephJesterLv22yr
2022-03-11 14:16

Very enjoyable read overall. The writing quality is very good with little to no grammar errors, the updates are decent, and the story development so far has been well-paced with the length of the chapters. And I personally enjoy the character design so far. Characters feel like their original counterparts in the show, albeit with slight alterations to make the authors' OC fit in nicely. And finally the world background... To me, I thought it was done in a way that wasn't an info dump, but also wasn't too boring or exciting that would distract the readers from the rest of the story. Overall this novel to me got 4.6; it's a great read, the characters are interesting, and it's not overly grimdark with Nazarick and the guardians. They feel more "human" in a way, and not just monsters who go around hating everything in existence, like some others novels represent them as. I honestly haven't figured out how to read reviews yet... Even though I've already posted a few. So whoever finds this, I would definitely tell you to "give this novel a try, at least to chapter 10".

Overlord: Reborn as an NPC

Delusion10
4.8
36 Chs

Liked by 24 people

LIKE
Replies7
Delusion10
Delusion10Author

This does put a smile on my face

2yr
15
CephJester
CephJesterLv2

I figured out how to read comments

2yr
7
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

really? teach me

CephJester:I figured out how to read comments
2yr
5
CephJester
CephJesterLv2

Haha, good joke. But I didn't know how to read comments. I originally used the mobile version and could see ratings on PC, but didn't know where to find them. Then lough and behold! I scroll down and there they are.

DAOIST_SUPREME:really? teach me
2yr
6
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

I thought you were joking, sorry😂

CephJester:Haha, good joke. But I didn't know how to read comments. I originally used the mobile version and could see ratings on PC, but didn't know where to find them. Then lough and behold! I scroll down and there they are.
2yr
7
CephJester
CephJesterLv2

DAOIST_SUPREME:I thought you were joking, sorry😂
2yr
4
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

Thanks 😭👍

CephJester:
image
2yr
3
Other Reviews
Delusion10
Delusion10Author

A shameless 4 Star review for myself because why not. The reason why I didn't give myself 5 Stars is that let's get real here. My fanfic isn't perfect. There are bound to be plot holes in my character and story because this is my first attempt at a proper piece of writing. Though as of writing, there are only 7 chapters, I hope you can provide me proper and helpful feedback about anything. I can only improve my writing if I have the proper advice. (Please don't be too harsh I'm only a freshman in High School) The story is inspired by MidasMan, the author of 'Yellowness' on fanfiction.net. I got permission to borrow some elements of the story but that's it. The story will change completely in a few chapters :)

2yr

Groenendaal
GroenendaalLv1

I went into this thinking it to be a carbon copy of yellowness and i wont lie it was for the beginning but it quickly branched off and avoided some of the things i disliked about yellowness. I was a bit worried about the MC ending up as a tag along side character but that has been avoided which is great aside from that the writing quality is great, stability is good and the characters are well described. Its overlord so its not hard to get a 5 for world background, just up to research which seems good in this.

2yr
ThanksgivingDinner
ThanksgivingDinnerLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
El_Tobi0999
El_Tobi0999Lv3

That only thing I hope for this fanfic. It's that the mc won't become a subordinate of Ainz. Other than that, I recommend reading this fanfic.

2yr
Month
MonthLv13

Bro its been soo long since i felt such addiction to a story. This Fic is soo well written and good. The background on the mc is also nice and i love it. Not to mention the mc’s appearance is fire. I need more chapters!!!!! If you have a patreon where there are early chapters give it to me and take my money!

2yr
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

The story is good, and it could have….no, it SHOULD have been great. The author however, continuously destroys his story for 13/18 chapters (thats as far as ive read) by making the MC A terrified, whiny, crying, shaking in his boots, overly cautious, complaining, garbage can of a human being I want to gouge my eyes out for half of each chapter before being able to get back into the story, and then the cycle repeats with the next chapter. The author stated he was a freshman in highschool so, i suppose i shouldnt be suprised. The story is still worth reading, just be aware that youll be causing yourself pain whilst doing so. BUT as they say! No pain, no gain!

2yr
marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

Until chapter 9 it is one of those stories where mc does nothing that matters. He went with Ainz into Carne and litteraly did everything Ainz did on original story. Even gesticulation. Mc also said that he does not want to change cannon so there is no reason to read. I am giving 3 stars only because idea, character looks and backstory, and gramar are good.

2yr
akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

cool premise and story but the main character is a little dumb and there are plot holes. review review review review review review review review review

2yr
Melitia_Snek
Melitia_SnekLv5

One of my favorite Overlord FF, I stopped reading it a few months back but came back and finished it just now. So I decided to leave a review- The writing quality is very good in this novel, and what I love the most are the interactions between the MC and the other characters. The upload schedule is a little wack, but I don't mind it as I prefer the author take their time and not write worse than usual. The only real downside to this novel is the author's -ahem- HORRIBLE "fashion style" (If you can even call it that), otherwise it's a surprisingly light read (most of the time).

2yr
Related Stories

MTS: Marvel and Beyond

Title: Multiversal Template System Alex was transmigrated to the body of a newly awakened mutant. The original owner of the body was also named Alex, Alex Locke, an ordinary college student. About a month ago, he suddenly awakened to a mutant ability and used it to escape unscathed from a burning building. Although he survived the disaster, there was no subsequent good fortune. A few days later, his parents discovered his mutant ability and, despising it, kicked him out of the house. He was then pursued by a mysterious organization and was accidentally abducted by gang members from Hell's Kitchen, ending up in this unknown underground prison. As for his mutant ability, it was a weak version of Sebastian Shaw's ability, which was the reason for him being captured. Just as Alex was despairing about how he will die just after transmigrating, a voice sounded in his ear. [ Congratulations, you have awakened the 'Multiversal Character Template System'! ] [ You have obtained the character template: Gojo Satoru! ] [ You have awakened the skill 'Six Eyes' lv1 ] "Oh..." A few hours later [ Template Fusion Rate: 5% ] [ New Skill Unlocked: Limitless Technique ] ===== Link: Påtreon.com/BaphometFiction I post 10 advanced chapters of this fanfic there. ===== I literally don't own anything here, all rights goes to their respective owners.

Baph0met · Anime & Comics
3.9
159 Chs

DxD: Scion of Lucifuge

Transmigrated into the world of High School DxD, Roy believed he had been handed a life of luxury and glory. Born into the prestigious Lucifuge family, with his Sister Grayfia as his strict yet devoted older sister, he thought he was destined for greatness.  99,997… 99,998… 99,999… 100,000!! But... reality proved harsher: Roy lacked demonic talent and, despite years of training, remained a Low-Class Devil. his peers effortlessly achieve High-Class status, he’s been trapped in a cycle of endless sword practice and ridicule. Yet, he refused to accept mediocrity. Ten thousand sword swings a day, relentless training.. Until one day.. [Ding! The Strongest Demon King System has been activated. Access functions to learn more.] --- - High School DxD - Main World! 1 - High School of the Dead [●] - First - World Traveled 2 - Demon Slayer [●] - Second - World Traveled 3 - Akame Ga Kill [●] - Third - World Traveled 4 - Bladedance of Elementalers [●] - Fourth - Current World

DragonnX · Anime & Comics
4.6
119 Chs

Pokémon: Chronicles of Freedom

For Cain, the promised land of opportunity in the Pokémon World was not the paradise he imagined. Instead, he fell into the hands of the sinister Team Rocket, a prisoner on an island where darkness devours hope. However, even in the most desperate moments, fate did not abandon him entirely. A strange twist brings him back to the beginning of it all, to the place where his dreams were buried under the shadows. Now, with the knowledge and scars of his previous life, Cain has the chance to correct the course of his destiny. Free from the chains of the past, he must forge his own path in a world full of mysteries and dangers. With new allies and old enemies, the battle for his freedom will not be easy, but Cain has decided that this time he will not fail. Neither against the Pokémon nor the humans who stand in his way. ... THIS IS A TRANSLATION! Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/GoldenDragonKing (120 chapters in advance, story tag is "PKCL-En").

Golden_DragonKing · Anime & Comics
4.8
292 Chs

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

[A Naruto Fan Fiction] Make the best of what you have, they said... But what I am supposed to do when the best I have are red-eyed freaks, a child who's supposed to be the jailor of the most dangerous being in the world, a snake bastard with serious boundary issues, and a whole world of super soldiers with licences to murder. And you know the best part? None of them like me so much... Oh shut it, old man! Take that Will of Fire and shove it up your— Yeah, this second swing at life isn't panning out... --------------------------------------------------------------- What to expect: - Gradual strength progression. Meaningful growth. The MC is a normal guy dumped into the Narutoverse, starts out weak and has to work and struggle for everything he gains. - "Slow" paced. My writing style is a zoomed-in look camera that follows the protagonist. It might seem slow, but I ensure something is always happening to progress the plot forward. - Gritty and often bloody fights and actions scenes with a focus on taijutsu—you'll see individual combat, team fights, and large-scale battle. - A different take on the Narutoverse. The world is full of superhuman mercenaries with liscenes-to-kill—that along with the protagonist's struggles paint the world in a much darker light. - Additions and expansion to the "chakra" power system. I consider myself a conservative when it comes to adapting the power system—and aim to retain the original feel while highlighting the best parts. - The Outsider's Resolve version of Narutoverse uses the [Naruto Manga] as the base—with additions from anime, books, and even Boruto (though very less likely). --------------------------------------------------------------- DISCORD SERVER: https://discord.gg/w5dJ82SfMr --------------------------------------------------------------- PATREON LINK: https://www.patreon.com/fictiononlyreader --------------------------------------------------------------- DECLARATION: This story is also present on: FFN, Ao3, SpaceBattles, SufficientVelocity, and ScribbleHub RoyalRoad [to be verified] --------------------------------------------------------------- DISCLAIMER: I don't own any character other than my OCs. The cover pic was commissioned from Kodah.art on Instagram

FictionOnlyReader · Anime & Comics
4.2
314 Chs

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · Anime & Comics
4.6
823 Chs
Login