Item: Overlord: Reborn as an NPC
Rating: 4.6
Author: Melitia_Snek

Melitia_SnekLv52yr

2022-08-25 09:44

One of my favorite Overlord FF, I stopped reading it a few months back but came back and finished it just now. So I decided to leave a review- The writing quality is very good in this novel, and what I love the most are the interactions between the MC and the other characters. The upload schedule is a little wack, but I don't mind it as I prefer the author take their time and not write worse than usual. The only real downside to this novel is the author's -ahem- HORRIBLE "fashion style" (If you can even call it that), otherwise it's a surprisingly light read (most of the time).

Overlord: Reborn as an NPC

Delusion10

4.8

36 Chs

Liked by 6 people

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Delusion10Author

Horrible? I prefer the term "Not horrible" xD. Jokes aside, thanks for the kind words, reader! I hope you'll like future chapters!

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A shameless 4 Star review for myself because why not. The reason why I didn't give myself 5 Stars is that let's get real here. My fanfic isn't perfect. There are bound to be plot holes in my character and story because this is my first attempt at a proper piece of writing. Though as of writing, there are only 7 chapters, I hope you can provide me proper and helpful feedback about anything. I can only improve my writing if I have the proper advice. (Please don't be too harsh I'm only a freshman in High School) The story is inspired by MidasMan, the author of 'Yellowness' on fanfiction.net. I got permission to borrow some elements of the story but that's it. The story will change completely in a few chapters :)

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