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Dosa96
Dosa96Lv62yr
2022-06-06 01:48

Old novel style..Novel from start--Earth got invaded and mc saved it--Super cosmic force mc joined and enemies destroyed it---mc learns their world is caged and mc saved it---mc becomes disciple of Great emperor and enemies invades their universe and mc saves it---Mc joins cosmic universe alliance and enemies invade, mc saves it by becoming super duper dumb strong---mc's world got invaded by nine other super-duper dumb strong and mc saves the world again.. Story ends.....

Immortal Stars

Three Thousand Rubbish Drafts
2.5
40 Chs

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GotMeAFatLady
GotMeAFatLadyLv5

This... this must be one of the worst introduction's I've ever seen...........................................................................................

2yr

Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv12

oh men after reading up to 32 chapters the plot armor is just too strong and the cliche is so severe that it's hurt my dao heart for a minute 😩 the first 8 chapters is like......

2yr
raptorfalcon
raptorfalconLv5

I've only read up to 37 of the raws, but the plot armor is already so severe, that I just can't bring myself to continue. The story itself has many other cliches, but to me they are not as aggravating as continuous "sudden enlightments" and last second power boosts.

2yr
Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1

A generic clichè novel with many standard tropes. The twist? There isn't one. The story, worldbuilding, plot and characters are very barebones. This novel seems so skeletal and basic without a hint of self awareness. Not to mention there's also the very rocky start. This novel is very much like Don't Run, My Disciple! I Want To Give You My Powers! They're both so perfunctory thought out and executed, I can't help but be disappointed at the authors who have the ability to execute a novel decently to a certain extent but lack creativity and soul. The translation quality seems to be alright. 0.75/5.

2yr
Lovelynovels
LovelynovelsLv5

Lets be honest... Its suc...... Djdjfhejebdndhrjdnsn3ueuf7czbdbehrhd fudhdudurjdjhcriruf fhjfjdjru fhjfjdjru fudhdudurjdjhcriruf fudhdudurjdjhcriruf urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj ifigigjrjrjjfjfusosnrgdzfufjdndjfufu zehehegrzfzdusinebfjfjf urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj

2yr
bstasic
bstasicLv5

Pushed through mtl and indeed quite cliche and repetitive, as comment from Dosa96 described one arc of saving end and then straight away the next one starts. This exact transition is done poorly. Other characters are not developed at all just passing bye or some stupid enemy causes trouble is killed and then his backing comes to get killed. Ending was very rushed, mc got a power-up and solved everything... However, for those that serach for a story with fast strenght gain and where mc destroys everything in his way to gain this strenght you found the right novel

2yr
Demes
DemesLv5

Lets be honest... Its ..... Djdjfhejebdndhrjdnsn3ueuf7czbdbehrhd fudhdudurjdjhcriruf fhjfjdjru fhjfjdjru fudhdudurjdjhcriruf fudhdudurjdjhcriruf urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj ifigigjrjrjjfjfusosnrgdzfufjdndjfufu zehehegrzfzdusinebfjfjf urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj urururhffhfhhfhfjfjfj

2yr
lynnjr05
lynnjr05Lv15

While not the best world building I've seen, the other aspects of this novel make up for it. Determination of the MC is wonderfully portrayed, giving Immortal Stars a great rythym which forces the reader to keep reading to see what happens next.

2yr
AncientGodDragon
AncientGodDragonLv5

Ah i feel so liberated while doing this to such garbage while i know that webnovel is going to delete my comment. Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trashTrash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trashTrash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trashTrash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trashTrash trash trash trash Trash trash trash trash

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