Item: Immortal Stars
Rating: 3
Author: raptorfalcon

raptorfalconLv52yr

2022-06-04 01:16

I've only read up to 37 of the raws, but the plot armor is already so severe, that I just can't bring myself to continue. The story itself has many other cliches, but to me they are not as aggravating as continuous "sudden enlightments" and last second power boosts.

Immortal Stars

Three Thousand Rubbish Drafts

2.5

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Liked by 12 people

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