Item: Immortal Stars
Rating: 2.6
Author: bstasic

bstasicLv52yr

2022-06-11 23:31

Pushed through mtl and indeed quite cliche and repetitive, as comment from Dosa96 described one arc of saving end and then straight away the next one starts. This exact transition is done poorly. Other characters are not developed at all just passing bye or some stupid enemy causes trouble is killed and then his backing comes to get killed. Ending was very rushed, mc got a power-up and solved everything... However, for those that serach for a story with fast strenght gain and where mc destroys everything in his way to gain this strenght you found the right novel

Immortal Stars

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