As of chapter 23 not alot going on. Mc just starting out with his master and doing first mission..grammar and 0verall writing is great. The negative is the mc is very lackluster and boring. Basic human and cliche af looks with blond hair and blue eyes. Even his light saber look is boring. Only thing that stands out is his light saber color. He only had mid count of 17,500 so he not really even a mc since Anakin double his count almost lol. So far mc doesn't stand out at all and seems more like a side character than story mc. Hopefully he gets better but idk
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LIKEYeah...like, Id really like to wish the best to the characters in stories. But... But when they are initially given a choice like - “Hey, dude, choose any race from the verse.” But they pick a human... I don't know why not just pick a Celestial (if you picked from SW). To get immortality and godlike powers from start. Theris no logic to not do it, if you can...
Thanks for the review, I will pass. No OP, then plot armor is OP. It's not like the original story is lacking in struggle, tragedy, angst and all that (especially the books), if I want all of that I will read the original. Even the tags don't exactly point to a resourceful MC with ambition, frankly, the description and tags made this seems very bland.
Temple guards often use them, however I think that's more of a regulation considering their saber style and choice of outfit. Now a regular force user with a gold saber is definitely uncommon. I think the only one like that we've seen is Ventress after her sabers were stolen by Baris Offee
Eins_Mensch:thats not all that special considering the temple guard have yellow doubel lightsabers
wororrin:Yeah...like, Id really like to wish the best to the characters in stories. But... But when they are initially given a choice like - “Hey, dude, choose any race from the verse.” But they pick a human... I don't know why not just pick a Celestial (if you picked from SW). To get immortality and godlike powers from start. Theris no logic to not do it, if you can...image