I come from having bad experiences with, pokemon blood ties, and pokemon alex burns, as well as others, so please.... please don't disappoint me, do you know how difficult it is to find a good pokemon fic???

Suggestion: when developing the events of the story, avoid abusing the armor of the plot, as it makes it artificial and uninteresting. The journey and character development is sometimes more important than the goal itself. As an example of Sneasel's capture, the act was similar to Chinese novels in which the MC inherits some cultivation technique from the "primordial demon god", a series of coincidences that led to its acquisition.

This story is about trans "women" working at a pokemon beauty salon. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....

Work is fine so far, hence the 3/5 ratings. Hisoka seems an interesting protagonist, if a bit cliché. The plot seems interesting enough that I'll continue to follow, but this story is a bit rough around the edges. Work could seriously use an editor. Author can't seem to decide if the work wants to be in past tense or present tense, which isn't confusing but is distracting. The paragraph spacing also leaves a lot to be desired; traditionally, during a conversation, paragraphs would be used to denote a change in the speaker, in order to help the audience better follow the conversation. Overall, this story is interesting and fine, but with an editor, it could become actively very good in a short period of time. I look forward to then.

Honestly, this story even had potential at the beginning but seriously after he found Ash's group, the MC seems almost like another person relating very easily to people in an almost forced way, taking rhydon for me was a bad choice and even things that happen afterwards somehow leaves a forming taste in my mouth.

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It was quite good in the beginning but content quality went on degrading as story progressed. Ending is weird and unsatisfactory (in my opinion).

This is better than other pokemon fics, I read not gonna lie at first when I saw that the cover is gardevior, I already expected some mess up chapter but it's not.

Story is good but it's just that the MC is a bit too lucky in his journeys. Well, perks of being a reincarnation with pokemon knowledge yeah. However, he hasn't suffered any notable defeats yet. While he's actually a strong and tactical trainer, it sounds too unrealistic to always win, considering that even champions have losing records.