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This story is very well written. I binge read this at an ungodly hour, and I'm now waiting for more.

You come before a starving man and ask him if he wants a meal or a feast. The meal will stave off his hunger, but the feast might last him longer. At the end of the day, though, the food and choice of gifting him said food lie only with you, and all he can ask for is either.

Give this book a read if you're tired of the absolute slop you'll find on this site. The writing is solid, and the pacing is fine, imo. Read all the chapters that are out now over a journey I was on and didn't get pulled out of it. I am absolutely pissed that some people are reviewing it with 2s and 3s when it deserves so much better. I admit the changes from the original are only slowly becoming better (in character interactions mainly for now), and I am yet unsure how emotional the MC is in some scenes but these are minor issues that will no doubt get better. I hope the author keeps up the great work. I'm looking forward to more chapters, and I hope you don't give up on this work! Cheers, man! P.S. I leave this review for my mental health's sake. I can't go on reading the Chinese translation bullshit on this site, and with any decently written being harassed I doubt I'll have a choice (although it might be that higher quality works attract snobs who expect that much better or something but I'm not giving them that much credit. They're on Webnovel like me, after all. -_-)

Good job! The cultivator who created this has shown great promise in creating this scripture, and this old monster hopes he keeps at it. This text claims to be written by a member of the righteous sect, but we will have to wait and see whether he succumbs to the harem cultist propaganda.

Basically, the game is an FPS where characters have abilities. The lore is basically from season trailers and stuff. Negatives may vary, but for omen (teleporting dude that can also summon hollow shadow spheres for cover and temporarily blind anyone in a straight line for some metres) is hinted to he in pain as his body is barely holding together. Jett, another agent with wind based flying powers, also seems to have caused a disaster when she awakened her powers.

You're doing great, Author! As someone already mentioned, you can't please everyone. Also, you'll keep getting better as you write, so unless you want to keep making revisions, it might be better to tell a good story. Your next one will be better anyway.

CHUTES and ladders??? I grew up with SNAKES and ladders, but honestly, chutes make so much more sense in the context of the game.

*story Damn... Started my review with a typo 😅

The stey is well written and has me hooked. Chapters are longer than many I've seen and don't blindly conform to Canon, like many fics do. The plot is moving along at a steady pace, and I hope the author keeps up the great work. Give it a read.