Item: Pokemon Hunter
Rating: 3
Author: joaos

joaosLv52yr

2022-04-26 03:33

Suggestion: when developing the events of the story, avoid abusing the armor of the plot, as it makes it artificial and uninteresting. The journey and character development is sometimes more important than the goal itself. As an example of Sneasel's capture, the act was similar to Chinese novels in which the MC inherits some cultivation technique from the "primordial demon god", a series of coincidences that led to its acquisition.

Pokemon Hunter

Skye12_

4.6

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Liked by 21 people

Replies4

Skye12_Author

Thanks for the feedback

2yr

BarnacleboyLv15

I dont get it. It wasnt a series of coincidences. He paid for information about the pokemon in the area. plus that example doest quite fit. You dont search for a ancient cultivation technique. You stumble upon it. i also feel like it would also be a better fit to compair the pokemon to a rare cultivation technique than an ancient one. Its a sneasel after all and not a mew lol

2yr

RagingDrakeLv5

Is there Romance? If it is,is it only a single love interest?

Skye12_:Thanks for the feedback

2yr

_ZypHer_Lv12

great author, is there any love interest for the mc or just Pokemon adventure?

Skye12_:Thanks for the feedback

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