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Despair512
Despair512Lv131yr
2023-12-06 11:20

This novel in one word, stable. The writing quality has been are throughout the entire 700 odd chapters thus far. Being detailed where it needs to be. This novel excels in word choice and more. Updating stability deserves a 5/5. Its stable. Nothing more needs to be said. Story development. This is for those who don’t want a quick story. It is slow, but each chapter builds upon something. It sets up brilliant foundations although the end goal is still elusive, if there is one, it does well with general building. Character Design. Though there is a lot of them, which does cause issues with developing so many Lifesketcher does a great job. Slowly giving each character in this story something that makes them unique. World background: In my opinion, this is what the author excels the most at. A lot of thought has gone into how this Universe/realms etc works. Although this might be a bit too much for some. Overall this is one of the better novels I’ve read on this platform. Although it will not be everyone’s cup of tea, for those who enjoy this type of novel, the author does honor to it. - :)

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heavenswheel
heavenswheelLv4

Is there any romance in the current story

LucasMorn
LucasMornLv3

No nothing forced yet. No romance.

heavenswheel:Is there any romance in the current story
Despair512
Despair512Lv13

Sorry for late reply. You’ve prob caught up by now. But to answer the question for other readers. It is pretty much null. For the mc a small amount that amounts to nothing. This is updated by chapter 1016

heavenswheel:Is there any romance in the current story
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puukkiss
puukkissLv3

Not too shabby. While the beginning stumbles a little as it tries to find its voice, tempo, and emphasis, it eventually settles into its own rhythm. MC could be described as OP while attempting to prove that he is not OP. He always has enough points or luck or items to do everything. At first, Inn is squished to the side as MC does dumb things on earth, but thankfully, before I lost my patience, Inn returns to center stage, with MC's shenanigans diminished. If the author ever considers rewriting the beginning, it is advised that they devote more time to the inn and either reduce or move the MC's shenanigans later. Many low star reviews are about absence of inn in beginning chapters: “Not even half of the first 20 chapter is actually about the Inn.”/Rappel; “This has great potential right until chapter 10. The author completetly ruined their work.”/KIING (10 chapter introduces cultivators on earth and shifts focus from inn to MC shenanigans on earth); “Forced plot with cultivators and his family.”/Elder; Readers dislike for cultivation probably comes from two facts: it takes away time from the inn and every world and dimension has the same type of cultivation. All worlds have similar feeling. It is almost bad as MassEffect color ending. Choose your world, one has humans, other world has humans and dead humans, third has humans and animals, but all of them have cultivation and humans! Even none humans look like humans. Overall, readable novel if you don’t mind OP MC, cultivation, and aliens that are all human.

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