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Despair512

Despair512

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2020-02-08 JoinedUnited States
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  • Despair512
    Despair51220h
    Replied to NebulousArcana

    Sadly. They just keep building the hate. 😅

    It was why she was here. Gannala awaited the day when the population of the Wean Clan reached a certain number before she could partake in her feast. That way, she'll progress through the Life Stage.
    altalt
    I'll Surpass The MC
    Eastern · Anvelope
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121d
    Commented

    Sadly I’ve come to dislike our favorite mammoth. :/ on well. Good chapters as usual.

    "Moreover, I'll create a powerful Tertiary Nature for her that'll allow her to use her Primary Nature without any worries." Gannala pointed at the sky, "She wouldn't be targeted by the Transcendents even if she were to transform a large region into the Sandy-Grey Void as long as she has that Tertiary Nature."
    altalt
    I'll Surpass The MC
    Eastern · Anvelope
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  • Despair512
    Despair5122d
    Commented

    Makes since. Given how he spoke.

    The soldier kept nodding, but despite the chill of the wind that night, he also kept sweating. It was not so easy to stand in the presence of an angry Sage, no matter how amicable they seem on the surface. 
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5125d
    Replied to DoaistDownstairs

    Ooo. Good catch.

    [ Tree Talent ] [ Store ] [ Inbox ] [ Inventory ]
    altalt
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
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  • Despair512
    Despair5125d
    Replied to Mithren

    Although I completely agree with you. This is someone speaking. Though it is probably not intentional, so it is probably an error. It isn’t technically, as people speak incorrectly. Sorry rant over. Take a like.

    "HEHEHE, I spent all of my 3 years of hard work money to buy this console. Fortunately, it would be worth it."
    altalt
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
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  • Despair512
    Despair5126d
    Commented

    … well 🫠

    The armoured man crushed the flame in his clenched fist and absorbed the golden energy from it. A few moments later, he shook his head.
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5127d
    Posted

    Here from the InnKeeper. So far, I am not disappointed. Writing Quality: It is stellar. I have yet to see any errors or weird phrases in which cause me pause, yet still it is complex and intriguing enough to grab my attention. Updating Stability: Once again, stellar. If his other novel’s 1000+ every day posts wasn’t good enough. He is doing it here as well. Story development: A different pace from the Innkeeper no doubt. One I am certainly interested in. Expanding on its unique power system and the role of these figures who hold power. It has done well thus far. Character Design: Nero is one of my favorite characters I’ve read. His personality seems to be one of determination and drive. Early on he recognized the avenues of growth. And he’s taking them. Following this concept, the other characters don’t seem to lack. Making me want to know more about them. Which is always impressive. World Background: This world is once again complex. Delightfully so. Although their is so many questions to be asked, so much has already given. And no holes that seem like it was overlooked rather than implanted exist. So overall? 5/5stars. ATM I am currently behind, chapter 49. I do look forward to finishing the fast pass grind and catching up. Cause it is worth the wait.

    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5128d
    Commented

    He needs a copy of Mavericks passive :/

    The first was to see how long after depletion did it take him to naturally recover enough to once again use his innate ability. It had already been a half hour since then, and Nero was finally beginning to feel some aether return to his body. Unless he sat down and actively restored his aether, he would have to rely on passive restoration which was a much slower process.
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5128d
    Commented

    Wow. This is a kindness we don’t deserve … what’s the catch?

    "We believe he used a Feign Death card to put himself in an artificial coma to prevent his injuries from getting worse. But he's still in a coma, so we're not sure. Once he wakes up, we will interview him as well."
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5128d
    Commented

    The complexity of the mind… 🫠

    How could one be so weak willed? How could he be so defeatist? It almost seemed like he wanted to be the victim!
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5129d
    Commented

    Neat. Good strategy. Unless they were the type of course. Then that could’ve went bad. Though reading ahead it good.

    "As far as crimes are concerned, I wonder how serious attempted rape is in the eyes of the army. My dads a sergeant, I should ask him sometime."
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5129d
    Replied to heavenswheel

    Sorry for late reply. You’ve prob caught up by now. But to answer the question for other readers. It is pretty much null. For the mc a small amount that amounts to nothing. This is updated by chapter 1016

    altalt
    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5129d
    Commented

    Ooo scary. Imagine a soul being just flies around and accidentally kills you…

    When Lex touched such a creature he finally felt some kind of sensation, but before he could focus on it, the creature's soul popped, startling Lex! He didn't mean to kill it, buts soul had been too fragile to even sustain his touch. After offering a silent prayer for the dead… for the dead whatever it was, Lex decided to continue with his reduced speed for now.
    altalt
    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5129d
    Posted

    A very interesting concept for a novel. ATM it is my favorite novel that I am currently reading. Overall it excels. Each strong point deserves attention. World building. Although for some, huge intricately built worlds can make it confusing for some, for me, the complexity is great. It never fails to amaze he how much of this world must be in the authors head for it to be expressed so well. Update stability despite the depth each chapter provides, the stability is great. The grammar does not faulter despite this fast pace of updating. And the characters. My god, they are excellent. Each representing neat concepts, and interesting ideas. If someone calls them dumb, it is simply because they are reading from an omniscient reader’s view. Making smart characters that seem smart without stupid justification is quite difficult. From my perspective, you have done quite well. Story development. Similar to world building/background. It’s great. Somehow even by having 7+ important people in the story, he does quite well giving us a view of them without it feeling wrong. Though Inala has taken a bit more of the spotlight recently, he is the mc so… but nonetheless, this at the very least deserves and attempt from new readers. Even if it’s complexity might scare some away. Great novel, highly recommend.

    altalt
    I'll Surpass The MC
    Eastern · Anvelope
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  • Despair512
    Despair51210d
    Commented

    Baby whale!

    She was fair, incredibly so, which only made the countless tattoos on her body pop out more. There was the red crow, the flying baby whale, the wolf, the abandoned castle and the cloudy mountain, all on her right hand, each tattoo giving space to one another, yet somehow seeming to be a part of a single work of art. These were the ones Nero already knew of, but newer additions had appeared. There was a broken sword, dripping with blood.
    altalt
    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121mth
    Replied to Ekronen

    For a sword? Tbh I saw this a lot in a novel called I’ll surpass the mc. It is pretty common it seems.

    < Empyrean Great Sword >
    altalt
    System's POV
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121mth
    Commented

    Hmm, poor grandpa got a bad rep, I don’t think he deserves it tho );

    With this, the Patriarch of the Leventis Clan closed his eyes, and let his senses expand towards the Everlasting Villa, where two little pests had wormed their way inside the residence. 
    altalt
    System's POV
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121mth
    Commented

    Looking forward to this. The concept is stellar. Now to see the execution!

    Ch 1 Prologue
    altalt
    System's POV
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121mth
    Commented

    These are some stellar descriptions. 💼

    Its twisted limbs seemed indomitable, each step resonating like a funeral toll. Its glowing eyes, filled with madness and rage, pierced her, tearing at her fragile soul.
    altalt
    Re:Villain
    Fantasy · Shadlight
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  • Despair512
    Despair5121mth
    Commented

    Tbh if it was a realistic story, this should’ve always been seen as a possibility. If they couldn’t deal with the sad death, then they simply didn’t understand the novel from the beginning…

    "Got it!" He grinned excitedly as he began to type a short, but nasty review, "Your mother must have been a female dog to birth a fatherless son like you. If that ending was the best you got, be hit by a truck and Isekai yourself. Even I can write a better story than yours and I'm not even literate, lol."
    altalt
    I'll Surpass The MC
    Eastern · Anvelope
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