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Sadly. They just keep building the hate. 😅
Sadly I’ve come to dislike our favorite mammoth. :/ on well. Good chapters as usual.
Makes since. Given how he spoke.
Ooo. Good catch.
Although I completely agree with you. This is someone speaking. Though it is probably not intentional, so it is probably an error. It isn’t technically, as people speak incorrectly. Sorry rant over. Take a like.
… well 🫠
Here from the InnKeeper. So far, I am not disappointed. Writing Quality: It is stellar. I have yet to see any errors or weird phrases in which cause me pause, yet still it is complex and intriguing enough to grab my attention. Updating Stability: Once again, stellar. If his other novel’s 1000+ every day posts wasn’t good enough. He is doing it here as well. Story development: A different pace from the Innkeeper no doubt. One I am certainly interested in. Expanding on its unique power system and the role of these figures who hold power. It has done well thus far. Character Design: Nero is one of my favorite characters I’ve read. His personality seems to be one of determination and drive. Early on he recognized the avenues of growth. And he’s taking them. Following this concept, the other characters don’t seem to lack. Making me want to know more about them. Which is always impressive. World Background: This world is once again complex. Delightfully so. Although their is so many questions to be asked, so much has already given. And no holes that seem like it was overlooked rather than implanted exist. So overall? 5/5stars. ATM I am currently behind, chapter 49. I do look forward to finishing the fast pass grind and catching up. Cause it is worth the wait.
He needs a copy of Mavericks passive :/
Wow. This is a kindness we don’t deserve … what’s the catch?
The complexity of the mind… 🫠
Neat. Good strategy. Unless they were the type of course. Then that could’ve went bad. Though reading ahead it good.
Ooo scary. Imagine a soul being just flies around and accidentally kills you…
A very interesting concept for a novel. ATM it is my favorite novel that I am currently reading. Overall it excels. Each strong point deserves attention. World building. Although for some, huge intricately built worlds can make it confusing for some, for me, the complexity is great. It never fails to amaze he how much of this world must be in the authors head for it to be expressed so well. Update stability despite the depth each chapter provides, the stability is great. The grammar does not faulter despite this fast pace of updating. And the characters. My god, they are excellent. Each representing neat concepts, and interesting ideas. If someone calls them dumb, it is simply because they are reading from an omniscient reader’s view. Making smart characters that seem smart without stupid justification is quite difficult. From my perspective, you have done quite well. Story development. Similar to world building/background. It’s great. Somehow even by having 7+ important people in the story, he does quite well giving us a view of them without it feeling wrong. Though Inala has taken a bit more of the spotlight recently, he is the mc so… but nonetheless, this at the very least deserves and attempt from new readers. Even if it’s complexity might scare some away. Great novel, highly recommend.
Baby whale!
For a sword? Tbh I saw this a lot in a novel called I’ll surpass the mc. It is pretty common it seems.
Hmm, poor grandpa got a bad rep, I don’t think he deserves it tho );
These are some stellar descriptions. 💼
Tbh if it was a realistic story, this should’ve always been seen as a possibility. If they couldn’t deal with the sad death, then they simply didn’t understand the novel from the beginning…