webnovel
heya2
heya2Lv42yr
2022-04-16 17:41

What a little gem I found. why is this story not on the highest rankings is beyond me. the writing and the flow are excellent, even if the story is moving a little too slow (not a criticism, I'm simply greedy for more haha). Keep it up, love your work.

Liked by 95 people

LIKE
Replies3
Readingworm19
Readingworm19Lv2

You hit the nail on the head great review

WovenMonarch
WovenMonarchLv2

I know horrible grammar but hey I was just typing my thoughts out and and even have period at the end of sentence but ya.

The content has been deleted
WovenMonarch
WovenMonarchLv2

Hate how this app works and hate the author that come here only for money and not for money and because they want to write an actually good story they don't even have good grammar literally stop reading a book cause I couldn't understand anything properly I could write better when I was 8 and I just started speaking English and sadly the book was good but grammar was literally horrible like my own writing right now but with massive spell errors except for simple words like the and stuff.

Other Reviews
puukkiss
puukkissLv3

Not too shabby. While the beginning stumbles a little as it tries to find its voice, tempo, and emphasis, it eventually settles into its own rhythm. MC could be described as OP while attempting to prove that he is not OP. He always has enough points or luck or items to do everything. At first, Inn is squished to the side as MC does dumb things on earth, but thankfully, before I lost my patience, Inn returns to center stage, with MC's shenanigans diminished. If the author ever considers rewriting the beginning, it is advised that they devote more time to the inn and either reduce or move the MC's shenanigans later. Many low star reviews are about absence of inn in beginning chapters: “Not even half of the first 20 chapter is actually about the Inn.”/Rappel; “This has great potential right until chapter 10. The author completetly ruined their work.”/KIING (10 chapter introduces cultivators on earth and shifts focus from inn to MC shenanigans on earth); “Forced plot with cultivators and his family.”/Elder; Readers dislike for cultivation probably comes from two facts: it takes away time from the inn and every world and dimension has the same type of cultivation. All worlds have similar feeling. It is almost bad as MassEffect color ending. Choose your world, one has humans, other world has humans and dead humans, third has humans and animals, but all of them have cultivation and humans! Even none humans look like humans. Overall, readable novel if you don’t mind OP MC, cultivation, and aliens that are all human.

Related Stories