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boredFish
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2023-09-15 11:00

author have some kind of brain damage. He keep introducing new plot device but never really do anything with it. His cheat is super OP but mc forgets about it for tens of chapters each time and barly even scrach the surface of its power. When he uses its as plotarmor to destroy ongoing plotline, theres also Mc jumping from one story line to another without brain, the whole hidden paradise island arc was unnecessary, and his writing style is frustrating mc always getting bullied left and right but do bare minimum without any satisfying ending. The whole return to konoha arc was the worse xianxia POS i've seen so far.

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