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hero4hire
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2023-09-15 07:40

Please don't read this novel: while everything was going well and stroy develop smoothly, author spend 100 chapters establishing mc life in konoha, there's a sudden twist during 1st ninja war, when he get kidnapped by madara and suddenly time skipped for 14 fking years, everything mc build turn to ash, story developed as cannon and 100 chapters i read was meaningless. It's the wrose feeling ever. I dont i've ever felt so disgusted with any book i've read. this is worse than when a certain author decided end a really good in the middle of war with a single chapter of summary because he felt bored. PLS PLS stay awy for your own mental health and don't get emotionally invested in this.

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joel_biju
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ur being to harsh. not all mc's has to leave the village in chp 2,this book is atleast more Orginal than others

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

bro, i love those 100 chapters of worldbuilding. The problem is author destroy all that by doing a decade long time skip where everyone MC knows died and he was trapped with madara for no reason. That would first arc became meaningless. Why even build so much if you're gonna kick it down like a sandcastle when you get bored and make a new one. This is one of the worse troupe in any fiction imo. All that emotional investment was for nothing, if that was gonna happen he should'nt have invested so many chapters on them. It was very clear author had no idea how to continue the story that early so he tried to push the story closer to cannon even if it goes against every logic in literature.

joel_biju:ur being to harsh. not all mc's has to leave the village in chp 2,this book is atleast more Orginal than others
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