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Back2Reality
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2022-06-29 09:18

I was completely captivated by the novel. At first I was a little critical of the main character, but later I found him better and better. Especially when I read other Naruto ff, it is often common that the character has a god comlex, has a dramatic past or other psychological disorders. But here I found a main character who is human, which makes him very likeable. Then there are a lot of funny moments, that made me have a good time White reading. However, what I have to criticise is the bad language in some places. Apart from that I have to point out again how much I like the ff and I am really happy about how regular the updates are. My last wish is to be able to finish reading this masterpiece. So please keep up the good work author-san.

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Aedan
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Romance?

Back2Reality
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No!

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