The writing is pure and lit, and the update of the chapters are stable too. The author seems to have updated continuously and is doing an excellent job. And I, too, feel the MC's motivation to enter the new world feels forced and breaks the story development. You could've added some other reason instead of being bored. Most readers hate it because we all get bored in one way or another, and that's not a good reason to enter a new world. Other than that, Character design and world background need a little tinkering. Sometimes, I don't get who is speaking. Then, there is less information about the world in the beginning. Maybe I can see more in the future chapters? Anyway, keep up the good work, author.
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Thanks for the review, and apologies for the late reply. Firstly, two things about the MC's reasoning. It's simplified. Really simplified, and that's because it gives me the chance to explore it at different times(plus I had hoped it would act as a good hook), but there is more to it. Secondly, I don't think it's fair to compare natural boredom that we as humans feel to the boredom of someone who can literally snap their fingers and have whatever they want. (But I can understand why people won't like it right now) As for the character development and world building, It's definitely progressing. Not as much for the development, since it's going to be fairly slow, but where the story is I feel like the world has been pretty well established, with some history, geography, and politics mentioned in varying amounts. Once again, thanks for the review!
