Item: The One Snap Boy
Rating: 4.4
Author: Mel_Aniv

Mel_AnivLv43yr

2022-02-08 03:58

Wow, such a masterpiece! The writing quality is well, beyond perfect! I know the author worked hard for making this novel and I am impressed with his work. Maybe improve the opening for more hooking power on your novel. Good luck with the contest! Will support you all the way and hope you win!

The One Snap Boy

Stormzz

4.6

151 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies3

StormzzAuthor

Thanks for the review. How would you suggest to improve the opening? Thanks for mentioning the WPC, as it stands I just hope to get front page of the rankings so I get some exposure from that, I'm too far behind top 4.

3yr

Mel_AnivLv4

Okay, will send you power stones from my 2 accounts tomorrow until the contest ends.

Stormzz:Thanks for the review. How would you suggest to improve the opening? Thanks for mentioning the WPC, as it stands I just hope to get front page of the rankings so I get some exposure from that, I'm too far behind top 4.

3yr

StormzzAuthor

Thanks, but using two accounts would honestly just put the story at risk. You're only supposed to use one for the powerstone voting and if you use multiple then they all just get stripped from the novel anyway. If you want to help I'd gratefully accept some, but only use one account.

Mel_Aniv:Okay, will send you power stones from my 2 accounts tomorrow until the contest ends.

3yr

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Author review here. I'm giving it 5* because I believe I can make it a 5* book. Thank you, reader, for checking out my novel. This novel is intended to be a submission for the WPC 256. I intend to make this book pretty dark, with an MC willing and able to use the darkness in their own heart to win. Nothing is taboo, but I won't include things just for shock value. If you enjoy, please leave feedback in reviews and comments, and also consider leaving a power stone or 2 :)

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