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Stormzz
StormzzAuthor2yr
2022-02-02 09:40

Author review here. I'm giving it 5* because I believe I can make it a 5* book. Thank you, reader, for checking out my novel. This novel is intended to be a submission for the WPC 256. I intend to make this book pretty dark, with an MC willing and able to use the darkness in their own heart to win. Nothing is taboo, but I won't include things just for shock value. If you enjoy, please leave feedback in reviews and comments, and also consider leaving a power stone or 2 :)

The One Snap Boy

Stormzz
4.6
151 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

WPC entry? Wow good luck! Hope you win! 🙏

2yr
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Stormzz
StormzzAuthor

Thank you!

Mel_Aniv:WPC entry? Wow good luck! Hope you win! 🙏
2yr
Lordwlesh
LordwleshLv13

is the Harem or have romance like all the girls of this universe dropped in front of mc and all the men of the universe dies

2yr
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KOS
KOSLv1

The first chapter immediately introduces the reader into a mystery-- there's no slow burn, no long wait before anything interesting occurs, its just there, starting you off with a mystery right from the start. There are only 6 chapters published so far, but I am definitely looking forward to seeing more. PS. I clicked on the Sandwich GIF and now I can't remove it.

2yr

TheCraZyaUthOr19
TheCraZyaUthOr19Lv2

The story is fantastic, and the plot progression is fascinating; read it, and you will not be disappointed! The writing quality is far, far above average! I know the author worked hard to create this story, and I am pleased by his efforts. Perhaps you might tweak the start of your work to make it more enticing. Good luck in the competition! Will be rooting for you all the way and hoping you win!

2yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Wow, such a masterpiece! The writing quality is well, beyond perfect! I know the author worked hard for making this novel and I am impressed with his work. Maybe improve the opening for more hooking power on your novel. Good luck with the contest! Will support you all the way and hope you win!

2yr
LucidBlue
LucidBlueLv13

Hi, I just read a heap of reviews, but couldn't find what I needed - I like a strong, smart MC; confident/relaxed is a big plus. Can anyone please let me know what this MC is like? ( I'll delete this review after I know, then provide a proper, detailed review after I'm done reading to the latest chapter if it has a decent MC ). Thanks for the help!

2yr
Ak02
Ak02Lv12

The writing is pure and lit, and the update of the chapters are stable too. The author seems to have updated continuously and is doing an excellent job. And I, too, feel the MC's motivation to enter the new world feels forced and breaks the story development. You could've added some other reason instead of being bored. Most readers hate it because we all get bored in one way or another, and that's not a good reason to enter a new world. Other than that, Character design and world background need a little tinkering. Sometimes, I don't get who is speaking. Then, there is less information about the world in the beginning. Maybe I can see more in the future chapters? Anyway, keep up the good work, author.

2yr
Sunus_Writes
Sunus_WritesLv2

I am onto your book like bread on butter. I have added this to my library and I love your book. it's scintillating from start to finish [img=update].

2yr
Bookmqe3
Bookmqe3Lv2

The doted by everyone thing makes me quite envious and in true such life where you do nothing and get everything will bore anyone since there'll be no life adventures for you. The novel is amazing and the development is cool, read this guys and you won't regret it!

2yr
Saher_Abidi
Saher_AbidiLv1

This book literally deserve 5 stars although the cover is bit 😅 but the writing skills are good.. the story is interesting and captivating ✨❤️ i hope for growth of your book

2yr
meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2

Readers will be swept because of your writing style, author! It's so simple yet engrossing, I love it how the words weren't complicated to understand. It's vividly describe and that's why I likkkke ittt

2yr
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