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DIVINE_DAO_OF_BONKLv43yr
2022-03-02 04:29

when we getting next chapter brooooooo? ?? ?I'm tired of waiting.firjejdidndidjrjrjrfifijfdjidjdhdheisbdjcjfjrifjrjeisiffjdiejffjdnrndifidj yes.

Demonic System In Naruto

MaliceGod
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ALiVe
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MAKE SURE THAT IF YOU READ IT, THAT YOU REVIEW IT SO AUTHOR WON'T DROP! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . And have a great day!

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JhonWark
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The_Black_Reven888
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All excellent ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

Great start and has huge potential. A must read and i promise u won’t regret it. The only thing i have a problem with so far is the update is too slow. You should update more as i’m looking forward to what mc will become in the future and what decisions he will make. Since there is a romance tag i hope it will be Kaguya if mc isn’t traveling to other worlds. Would prefer a small harem of 2-3. Worlds and girls suggestions : Arifureta : Yue DBZ (After winning the tourney he uses the super drag balls to wish for his fam’s revival if he hasn’t done so yet)

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ahallbert
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There many out there with similar types in the genre but so far this is definitely one of the ones I have liked the best. I really want to see where this story goes.

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Mirio_kun
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I am curious about few things. Why did you give him such op ability, item? Are you planning to nerf him to continue the story? Are you going to even go past 10 chapters? Most of the fic I read like this gets dropped very fast, if it's not Chinese that is. Why is he smiling in front of Hokage, Even after his parents death? It will look very suspicious. And if the Hokage let the Uchiha clan get massacred why would he save him, instead of killing him? After all you are showing a different third Hokage from canon.

3yr
thecreed
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Florian1990
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Dear Author, I dont waste my time on reviews before an Author has at least 30 chapters and at least some release stability. Why should i analyze your writing style if there is no stuff to analyze? 4 chapters aren't enough for that. I will write an real review if you reach 30 chapters in lets say 2-3 months time.

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GRAVITY
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Akasxh
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it's okay but maybe you need to be more subtle , the protagonist is kinda weak willed if i have to say. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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