I will tell you what I feel, there isn't much criticizing about English, conversation doesn't seem forced so it's a novel with good potential 👍 But ... Mc is really annoying, he is whining, like everytime. He even have some strange feeling for 5-6 age girls, like you are so young, you shouldn't feel that much but... *sigh I love seeing these traits in mc * confidence * smart but I didn't see any confidence in mc, he is always worried, I know you have responsibilities but that doesn't give an excuse to say it repeatedly till it becomes annoying. And he summons too many characters, it took away all the fun when you have too many. Pro:- Mc being kind . Try it yourself and you will find whether it's good or not. Current reading status:- when he summons diona(around 25 chapter I think)

I haven't read it but the author is one best one on this platform. Don't disappoint me, author. ...............................................

Best author in the platform, there is nothing more needed to say. I don't even need to read the story to know it is good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I have read the all the chapters and i can say that this story is not my cup of tea. Even though the focus is on the mc he feels like a side character when it comes to personal strength. He is weak, without talent, and a {good type of personality}/{he is not cruel or lower moral limits.}. The only thing that he has is extreme determination, and great stamina for s*x.

cuckers getting happy reading ntr and defending it.........................................................................................................

Einlion! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!! DON'T INCLUDE NTR IN THIS MASTERPIECE OF A NOVEL!!! MY INSTINCT ARE SCREAMING AND WARNING ME THAT THIS STORY ARE GOING TO GET DARKER AND DARKER FROM HERE ON OUT!!!

It's a good novel that's for sure, but it's really not my cup of tea, more so for a fanfic. I admittedly have only read about 20 chapters, but so far the MC feels like a glorified side character. He is needlessly untalented, especially when he should NOT be so. I understand the author is trying to give his work an air of realism, but that could be done using the World background instead of stripping your MC. He could have honestly chose a nobody instead of Paul who was notoriously called a genius and it would have the same, if not better. In a nutshell, it's a good novel, but the MC can be frustrating. Give it a try and judge.

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it's good fanfic but I can't I really can't. it has good grammar, a good world-building, good character development, conversation between people is very smooth and feels real my problem is with mc: not very confident, very unstable with his emotions, very untalented unnecessarily so it's good fanfic but not my cup of tea so try first then judge.