it's good fanfic but I can't I really can't. it has good grammar, a good world-building, good character development, conversation between people is very smooth and feels real my problem is with mc: not very confident, very unstable with his emotions, very untalented unnecessarily so it's good fanfic but not my cup of tea so try first then judge.
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LIKEi have read upto 32 btw.
sure he works hard but with his personality it's hard to like him just like sakura making the whole naruto less likable (i still like naruto don't misunderstand i just think it could be better with her being replaced or some other alternative......) does he get better or not because i think should just stop reading it.
I mean, he basically becomes the Emperor of the Demon Continent before the end of volume 2 xD. His struggles do continue for a time, but that's to be expected of someone in his situation. If you think you would be able to deal with that kind of pressure without experiencing some form of anxiety, you simply aren't being honest with yourself.
well thats true
but his way of handling pressure and anxiety is very unlikable his whole personality is unlikable (to me at least), the way he handles his girls is very bad as well as their interactions (not in writing or grammar sense but in a sense how he interacts), how his way of interacting with the girls get shifted every second like sometimes he says I will interact with everyone if possible or another time when he says he will not interact with the character if possible(i could be wrong on this one as it's been a long time when I dropped it), I could point out more but I stopped reading around 30ish chapter
Then you're simply uninformed x_x...
I know that's why I said I only watched around 30ish chapter
Yes, his personality and the way he deals with outside pressure and stimulation is depressing for me. He's just not a likable character, perhaps due to the world setting effect ? I see a lot of similar comments in this review section about his personality.
