I will tell you what I feel, there isn't much criticizing about English, conversation doesn't seem forced so it's a novel with good potential ๐ But ... Mc is really annoying, he is whining, like everytime. He even have some strange feeling for 5-6 age girls, like you are so young, you shouldn't feel that much but... *sigh I love seeing these traits in mc * confidence * smart but I didn't see any confidence in mc, he is always worried, I know you have responsibilities but that doesn't give an excuse to say it repeatedly till it becomes annoying. And he summons too many characters, it took away all the fun when you have too many. Pro:- Mc being kind . Try it yourself and you will find whether it's good or not. Current reading status:- when he summons diona(around 25 chapter I think)
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what a big mistake it is not to read E.P.I.C (especially in the danmachi arc where there was a lot of lemon) because even though it starts off being somewhat annoying, there is character development and the backstory is entertaining. after 100 chapters (when you start to read and half get hooked in 2 days you read them) you are SUPER hooked, that's what happened to me until I got to the tower of god arc.
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The irony here is amazing.
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I fail to see how I'm being whiney? At least compared to how vhan like to whine
Einlion:The irony here is amazing.
Bruh, you're complaining about another novel in the review section of a completely different story xD
Konrad_The_Fourth:I fail to see how I'm being whiney? At least compared to how vhan like to whine
Sure
Einlion:Bruh, you're complaining about another novel in the review section of a completely different story xD
Its just Eins way of writing character, wait for about 500-1000 chapters. It will become bearable.
I can't wait that long, I was hoping the mc changed but reading the comments I see that's not happening.
Jack_Anarchy:Its just Eins way of writing character, wait for about 500-1000 chapters. It will become bearable.
What is EPIC ?
PUERKO_Senpai:what a big mistake it is not to read E.P.I.C (especially in the danmachi arc where there was a lot of lemon) because even though it starts off being somewhat annoying, there is character development and the backstory is entertaining. after 100 chapters (when you start to read and half get hooked in 2 days you read them) you are SUPER hooked, that's what happened to me until I got to the tower of god arc.
I dont really understand your complaint, him having some self doubt is understandable considering his circumstances and background, as for the summons, it totally comes down to the author's ability, and ein managed it all pretty well.
and the whole feeling thing, man literally knew and 'lived' with them beforehand with genshin impact consuming his late years before his death
I was wondering what novel author has made since everyone wrote โitโs made by einโ and itโs EPICโฆ well at least I know to stay away now, so thanks for your comment :)
PUERKO_Senpai:what a big mistake it is not to read E.P.I.C (especially in the danmachi arc where there was a lot of lemon) because even though it starts off being somewhat annoying, there is character development and the backstory is entertaining. after 100 chapters (when you start to read and half get hooked in 2 days you read them) you are SUPER hooked, that's what happened to me until I got to the tower of god arc.
You want people to go through 100 chapters of annoying content to get to the good part? Huh
PUERKO_Senpai:what a big mistake it is not to read E.P.I.C (especially in the danmachi arc where there was a lot of lemon) because even though it starts off being somewhat annoying, there is character development and the backstory is entertaining. after 100 chapters (when you start to read and half get hooked in 2 days you read them) you are SUPER hooked, that's what happened to me until I got to the tower of god arc.
you have summoned me
Einlion:Bruh, you're complaining about another novel in the review section of a completely different story xD
Perfect Counter!
Konrad_The_Fourth:I fail to see how I'm being whiney? At least compared to how vhan like to whine
Is E.P.I.C. really worth it? I don't mind giving it a try, but I would like an honest review about it since we seem to read many similar novels/FF.
PUERKO_Senpai:what a big mistake it is not to read E.P.I.C (especially in the danmachi arc where there was a lot of lemon) because even though it starts off being somewhat annoying, there is character development and the backstory is entertaining. after 100 chapters (when you start to read and half get hooked in 2 days you read them) you are SUPER hooked, that's what happened to me until I got to the tower of god arc.
