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HxHEnthusiast
HxHEnthusiastLv12yr
2022-12-23 02:26

I just finished reading this One Piece fanfic... It was amazing. The writing was top-notch and the characters were very very very very well-developed. It got me feeling like I was right there chilling with them on their adventure, experiencing all the ups and downs along the way. The world-building was also really impressive and made it easy to get lost in the story. But what really made this fanfic stand out to me was the emotional depth. There were moments that had me on the edge of my seat and others that had me almost tearing up, real. It's not often that a (one) piece of fiction can make me feel so invested in the characters, but this one definitely did. Overall, I'd say this is a 5/5 100% fr being serious rn. A great read for all my One Piece enthusiasts or just anyone looking for a well-written story :) (I have yet to get past chapter 1)

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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Romance? Harém?

AmarHazlin
AmarHazlinLv4

is this a copy from another platform? if so can you drop the link?

Posthumously
PosthumouslyLv11

HxHEnthusiast
HxHEnthusiastLv1

Nope, all original

AmarHazlin:is this a copy from another platform? if so can you drop the link?
RagingDrake
RagingDrakeLv5

Then why’d you say u finished it? Is it completed?

HxHEnthusiast:Nope, all original
Ruckducker
RuckduckerLv4

Think he meant all the chapters released at the time of his comment

RagingDrake:Then why’d you say u finished it? Is it completed?
HxHEnthusiast
HxHEnthusiastLv1

Look at the last sentence :)

RagingDrake:Then why’d you say u finished it? Is it completed?
Grimsbane
GrimsbaneLv4

You got me there

zen_garden
zen_gardenLv4

Great fanfic for one piece

Lingot
LingotLv4

I gave you the holy numberthank me

Zer0reZ
Zer0reZLv4

no romance so far

machadogbc:Romance? Harém?
Zer0reZ
Zer0reZLv4

it's not a copy the author here is the one who made it

AmarHazlin:is this a copy from another platform? if so can you drop the link?
theanimemail
theanimemailLv10

the writing is in fact not top quality: the grammar and word choice is all over the place.

SystemEngineer
SystemEngineerLv4

it feels like Ai wrote this

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