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Unlimited_bw_1729
Unlimited_bw_1729Lv122yr
2023-01-06 11:18

Very good One Piece fanfic.Smoker in canon became useless after Alabasta to the point of becoming canon fodder(almost) in the new world.Having a logia,his potential is unlimited and I think we will see that in this fanfic.Writing quality is excellent.Updating stability is good.I WANT TO READ MORE.

One Piece: White Hunter

BravoBuds
4.7
178 Chs

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Zom_bloog
Zom_bloogLv3

wouldn't say unlimited, bro can't swim 💀 and is weak to water.

2yr
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Zeke_goat
Zeke_goatLv13

A weakness doesn’t lower potential

Zom_bloog:wouldn't say unlimited, bro can't swim 💀 and is weak to water.
2yr
5
Betaxx
BetaxxLv5

All of the strongest characters in one piece, have either Paramecia, Zoan or none. Logia become the weakest of the three types in the new world

2yr
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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Well i wouldnt say that but yeah i dont see much potential in Smokers smoke fruit. I think its at the bottom of the Logias. Only the seamo might be worse.

Betaxx:All of the strongest characters in one piece, have either Paramecia, Zoan or none. Logia become the weakest of the three types in the new world
2yr
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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

His potential is definitely not unlimited considering that he has the weakess Logia of all. Only the swamp fruit may be worse.

2yr
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Betaxx
BetaxxLv5

I mean the best logia users are the admirals, which i won't put them in the strongest in category. The only exception i can think of is blackbeard, and his DF might also turn out to be another mythical zoan.

Crimson_King:Well i wouldnt say that but yeah i dont see much potential in Smokers smoke fruit. I think its at the bottom of the Logias. Only the seamo might be worse.
2yr
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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Well i dont think Admirals have been given enough spot light to truly show what they can do. The war of the best was cool but that was before Haki was properly set up so power scaling is a huge problem.

Betaxx:I mean the best logia users are the admirals, which i won't put them in the strongest in category. The only exception i can think of is blackbeard, and his DF might also turn out to be another mythical zoan.
2yr
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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Romance?

2yr
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

It actually does if the character cant solve/overcome it. depending on how its defined/written smoke smoke fruit could be overpowered if there isnt a BSNerf. Its a literal Logia which can be classsified as air and could be develiped similar to ceasar clown and he was pretty BS considering he actually isnt a fighter bit a pretty dedicated scientist

Zeke_goat:A weakness doesn’t lower potential
2yr
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Zeke_goat
Zeke_goatLv13

That’ what I mean potential is more of the characters ability to overcome their own obstacles. Potential being unlimited does not mean no weakness just that they have the abillity to grow past it.

Bierbart:It actually does if the character cant solve/overcome it. depending on how its defined/written smoke smoke fruit could be overpowered if there isnt a BSNerf. Its a literal Logia which can be classsified as air and could be develiped similar to ceasar clown and he was pretty BS considering he actually isnt a fighter bit a pretty dedicated scientist
2yr
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HxHEnthusiast
HxHEnthusiastLv1

I just finished reading this One Piece fanfic... It was amazing. The writing was top-notch and the characters were very very very very well-developed. It got me feeling like I was right there chilling with them on their adventure, experiencing all the ups and downs along the way. The world-building was also really impressive and made it easy to get lost in the story. But what really made this fanfic stand out to me was the emotional depth. There were moments that had me on the edge of my seat and others that had me almost tearing up, real. It's not often that a (one) piece of fiction can make me feel so invested in the characters, but this one definitely did. Overall, I'd say this is a 5/5 100% fr being serious rn. A great read for all my One Piece enthusiasts or just anyone looking for a well-written story :) (I have yet to get past chapter 1)

2yr

ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

I haven't even read it yet but I'm gonna leave a positive review before diving in. Why? Because this is literally the only Smoker based fanfic I've even heard of. In all seriousness, last month I was thinking how cool it would be if someone actually utilized his fruit, I feel like it has a lot of potential but we just haven't been able to see it. Also it looks cool, Smoker looks cool though smoking is bad for your health (IRL, remember that kids). I bet smoking is a censored word and this review won't show anyways, meh.

2yr
Raume
RaumeLv11

Honestly, idealistic fics are some of the worst that exist, mostly because they are hypocritical and suffer from a logical plot, and this is demonstrated once again here, my friend wants to save everyone but while he thinks about it there are thousands who are dying. friend, you reincarnated to be a policeman and a good boy? Please, what this fic needs is individualism, this good boy plot is for children, you don't even need to be a pirate, just be an adventurer, in the world of One Piece, everyone who sails can only be 3 things, Marine, Pirate or Merchant.

2yr
Huevo_Izquierdo
Huevo_IzquierdoLv1

The author makes the world government look like they are the biggest idiots, they don't look like the organization that ruled the world for 800 years

1yr
1_Am_A_New_God
1_Am_A_New_GodLv4

there are too many 5 stars for an average fanfic it's fishy %%%%%%%%%%%©©%%%%%%%%©®°©°®°®®=\°©°©°=^=\¢π÷^×^°^$π¢¢π¢÷^=¢÷¢÷÷^÷¢π¢÷^=^°$π•÷^=¢÷^×^÷¢÷^÷™÷®×^÷®°®÷^π$√¥°™{™{^÷©÷™×™÷^×°=π¢=®×©°©=®π¢π©°¢÷°¢÷®°©°®÷¢=©=®=™

1yr
Jhon_4525
Jhon_4525Lv1

One of the worst One Piece fics, full of inconsistencies in the story as if the author had not investigated the world he is writing about I don't understand how this has such a high rating

1yr
DARTH_INSANIS
DARTH_INSANISLv4

Slow pace with annoying, cry baby mc. Couldn’t make it past ch10

2yr
Hozy
HozyLv3

---------------------------------------- The story is amazing so far. Pace neither too slow nor too fast, cohesive events and not badly explained or badly detailed, as well as a good characterization of the characters and a healthy interaction between them. The updates are also amazing, and the chapters are also a reasonable size, which is very satisfying. I look forward to seeing more of the worldbuilding and the relationships Smoker will build with people outside of the Marines. In short, incredible story, author! ^^ ----------------------------------------

2yr
SSpextrillex
SSpextrillexLv4

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

2yr
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